六級高分作文的寫作模式及經典范文（一）

　　由于六級寫作都是提綱式寫作，有時，我們可以采用對應法按照中文提綱分別寫成三段。

　　如：

　　提綱： 1 ) 有人認為淡水是取之不盡的。(雨水、河水、井水 )

　　2 ) 實際上淡水是非常緊缺的。(人口增加、工業用水增加)

　　3 ) 我們應該怎么辦?

　　Global Shortage of Fresh Water

　　Generally, people think that fresh water is inexhaustible. Every year there is enough rain. And there is plenty of fresh water in the rivers and lakes. Whats more, we have a lot of underground water.

　　Actually, fresh water is in a short supply. Due to the rapid population increase, fresh water consumption remains great. Besides, with the development of industry, more water is needed. Moreover, a lot of our rivers and lakes have been so polluted that water from them is undrinkable.

　　We must take some measures to solve the problem of water shortage. First, population growth should be slowed down to reduce fresh water demand. Second, pollution should be controlled to purify fresh water in the rivers and lakes. What is most important, we should cherish every drip of water in our daily life.

　　再如：

　　提綱： 1 ) 有人認為錢是幸福之本( source of happiness )

　　2 ) 有人認為金錢是萬惡之源

　　3 ) 我的看法。

　　Some think that money is the source of happiness. Once they have money, they will enjoy everything. They can use the money they have to buy, a beautiful house or even a wife.

　　Some others think that money is the root of all evil. Due to the greed for money, people will do various kinds of evil things, such as stealing, robbing or even murder. Money can easily change a kind, honest man into a cruel, cunning woe.

　　In my opinion, both of the above-mentioned viewpoints go to an extreme. Money itself is neither good nor evil. It all depends on how we look at it. We can not deny the importance of money in the modern society. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the fact that something can not be bought by money, such as friendship, true love and so on.

　　這兩例都是采用了對應寫作方式，將提示中的三句分別擴展成三段，三段之間相互銜接，構成一個完整的篇章。

　　2 .調整法

　　盡管是提綱式寫作，提綱所提示的只是文章所要包括的主要內容，卻不是文章的結構模式，一般情況下，同學們應根據英語文章的類型，重新安排文章。如上面有關 錢 的一個寫作，按照英語的表達習慣，最好是加上一個引子。

　　What is money? To this question, different people hold differently. Some thing money is the source of happiness, while some regard it as the root of all evils. As far as I am concerned, they both have their reasons

　　Those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house, beautiful clothes, or luxurious cars, and can enable them and their families live comfortably. They even believe that money can bring power, friendship, and love. But due to the temptation of money, there are many people who become thieves, robbers, or murderers. It is also out of the greed for money that some officials forget their duty and cause enormous losses to the country, so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money.

　　In fact, money is merely a medium of exchange. It may bring you happiness; it may lead you to a life of crime. Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.

　　由于六級寫作都是提綱式寫作，有時，我們可以采用對應法按照中文提綱分別寫成三段。

　　如：

　　提綱： 1 ) 有人認為淡水是取之不盡的。(雨水、河水、井水 )

　　2 ) 實際上淡水是非常緊缺的。(人口增加、工業用水增加)

　　3 ) 我們應該怎么辦?

　　Global Shortage of Fresh Water

　　Generally, people think that fresh water is inexhaustible. Every year there is enough rain. And there is plenty of fresh water in the rivers and lakes. Whats more, we have a lot of underground water.

　　Actually, fresh water is in a short supply. Due to the rapid population increase, fresh water consumption remains great. Besides, with the development of industry, more water is needed. Moreover, a lot of our rivers and lakes have been so polluted that water from them is undrinkable.

　　We must take some measures to solve the problem of water shortage. First, population growth should be slowed down to reduce fresh water demand. Second, pollution should be controlled to purify fresh water in the rivers and lakes. What is most important, we should cherish every drip of water in our daily life.

　　再如：

　　提綱： 1 ) 有人認為錢是幸福之本( source of happiness )

　　2 ) 有人認為金錢是萬惡之源

　　3 ) 我的看法。

　　Some think that money is the source of happiness. Once they have money, they will enjoy everything. They can use the money they have to buy, a beautiful house or even a wife.

　　Some others think that money is the root of all evil. Due to the greed for money, people will do various kinds of evil things, such as stealing, robbing or even murder. Money can easily change a kind, honest man into a cruel, cunning woe.

　　In my opinion, both of the above-mentioned viewpoints go to an extreme. Money itself is neither good nor evil. It all depends on how we look at it. We can not deny the importance of money in the modern society. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the fact that something can not be bought by money, such as friendship, true love and so on.

　　這兩例都是采用了對應寫作方式，將提示中的三句分別擴展成三段，三段之間相互銜接，構成一個完整的篇章。

　　2 .調整法

　　盡管是提綱式寫作，提綱所提示的只是文章所要包括的主要內容，卻不是文章的結構模式，一般情況下，同學們應根據英語文章的類型，重新安排文章。如上面有關 錢 的一個寫作，按照英語的表達習慣，最好是加上一個引子。

　　What is money? To this question, different people hold differently. Some thing money is the source of happiness, while some regard it as the root of all evils. As far as I am concerned, they both have their reasons

　　Those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house, beautiful clothes, or luxurious cars, and can enable them and their families live comfortably. They even believe that money can bring power, friendship, and love. But due to the temptation of money, there are many people who become thieves, robbers, or murderers. It is also out of the greed for money that some officials forget their duty and cause enormous losses to the country, so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money.

　　In fact, money is merely a medium of exchange. It may bring you happiness; it may lead you to a life of crime. Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.