考研英語小作文批改的例文第一期投訴信

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam ，

　　I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didnt work after I used it once, which I make sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam ，

　　I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didnt work after I used it once, which I make sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　9分

　　作文寫的很好，再注意一下小的細節

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy(拼寫錯誤，改為daily) life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　考研小作文的字數要求是100詞，不要超過太多，考試時間很緊張，把過多的時間用在寫小作文上是不合理的。作文寫的不錯，但要再細心一點，盡量避免單詞拼寫錯誤。

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam ，

　　I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didnt work after I used it once, which I make sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam ，

　　I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didnt work after I used it once, which I make sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　9分

　　作文寫的很好，再注意一下小的細節

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy(拼寫錯誤，改為daily) life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　考研小作文的字數要求是100詞，不要超過太多，考試時間很緊張，把過多的時間用在寫小作文上是不合理的。作文寫的不錯，但要再細心一點，盡量避免單詞拼寫錯誤。