考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改38

　　Sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Li Ming】(落款部分位于右下角)

　　點評：5-6分

　　雖然waitress是一個很普通的職業，但是這封求職信并不是很好寫，第二段中你前兩個方面的內容比較空洞，只是大概的說了一下有意愿有經驗，所以要注意選材。

　　Dear Sir or Madam(加逗號) I am writing to express my interest to(一般用in， interest in)your recent advertised position for a waitress in your restaurant(拼寫錯誤). Enclosed with this letter is my resume which further details my qualifications and previous worke(拼寫錯誤)experience. As a young man whose primary interest is in providing service to others, I find the position does fall in with my former training and strength. No(應該是Not)only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, but my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly man who can quickly establish the rapport with people of all ages. I appreciate your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. 【Sincerely(一般用Yours sincerely，注意最后有逗號)