考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)資料考研英語(yǔ)作文范文的批改44

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam:(英語(yǔ)中有逗號(hào)) I am a student graduate from Nanjing Normal University. My major is chinese(Chinese) professional. I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for a staff number. I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, I worked as a staff in a compang(拼寫錯(cuò)誤) in last summer holiday. Whats more, my cheerful personality is well suited to this position. Last but not least my hobbies include music and play basketball. I would extend my precious appreciation if you are so kind to give me an oppotrunity(拼寫錯(cuò)誤) to your companys interview. Looking forwad(拼寫錯(cuò)誤) to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 點(diǎn)評(píng)：6分中間一段顯得有點(diǎn)過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)潔，可以再加一條你的學(xué)習(xí)對(duì)工作的幫助等信息?；蚴菍⒆钪匾囊粭l展開(kāi)一兩句來(lái)說(shuō)明。注意拼寫。