2024高考英語(yǔ)二輪書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練：圖文作文（01）

　　訓(xùn)練（01）及參考范文

　　情景作文（20分）

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報(bào)英文版正在開(kāi)展“續(xù)寫(xiě)雷鋒日記”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來(lái)，向校報(bào)投稿。

　　注意：1.日記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。

　　2.詞數(shù)不少于60。

　　Saturday，June2

　　Fine

　　This morning

　　【參考范文】

　　第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作

　　假如你叫李華，是惠州的一名中學(xué)生。最近，當(dāng)?shù)卣趯?shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)，結(jié)果引起人們的廣泛爭(zhēng)議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，反映這一情況。

　　贊成觀點(diǎn) 反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)

　　1．能夠解決交通問(wèn)題，方便人民生活；

　　2．有助于發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，提高人民生活水平；

　　3．有助于提高惠州作為現(xiàn)代化旅游城市的形象。 1．會(huì)造成環(huán)境污染；

　　2．會(huì)產(chǎn)生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活；

　　3．時(shí)常造成交通堵塞。

　　[寫(xiě)作要求]

　　1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；

　　2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和學(xué)生姓名。

　　3．短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入5個(gè)句子中。

　　[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

　　句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

　　參考詞匯：快速公交系統(tǒng)BRT

　　高架橋overpass

　　Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　第二節(jié)：讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)

　　閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.

　　One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.

　　She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn't need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.

　　【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

　　1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；

　　2．然后以約120個(gè)詞就“父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括；

　　（1）請(qǐng)舉一個(gè)你或你周圍的周學(xué)得到父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)的事例；

　　（2）談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。

　　【寫(xiě)作要求】

　　1．在作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

　　【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

　　概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

　　1、Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.

　　Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.

　　But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.

　　2、Editor,

　　I'm writing to talk about the construction project which is going on in our city.

　　Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people. Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because they can not only solve some traffic problems which is becoming worse and worse, but also help to make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, they think that it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.

　　But others are against it, saying that they the project may cause air pollution. They also believe the noise produced by the project will disturb people's peaceful life. Personally, I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and the people. If we focus our attention on the environment, all of us will lead a better life in the future.

　　第二節(jié)：讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)：

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

　　訓(xùn)練（01）及參考范文

　　情景作文（20分）

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報(bào)英文版正在開(kāi)展“續(xù)寫(xiě)雷鋒日記”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來(lái)，向校報(bào)投稿。

　　注意：1.日記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。

　　2.詞數(shù)不少于60。

　　Saturday，June2

　　Fine

　　This morning

　　【參考范文】

　　第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作

　　假如你叫李華，是惠州的一名中學(xué)生。最近，當(dāng)?shù)卣趯?shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)，結(jié)果引起人們的廣泛爭(zhēng)議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，反映這一情況。

　　贊成觀點(diǎn) 反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)

　　1．能夠解決交通問(wèn)題，方便人民生活；

　　2．有助于發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，提高人民生活水平；

　　3．有助于提高惠州作為現(xiàn)代化旅游城市的形象。 1．會(huì)造成環(huán)境污染；

　　2．會(huì)產(chǎn)生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活；

　　3．時(shí)常造成交通堵塞。

　　[寫(xiě)作要求]

　　1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；

　　2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和學(xué)生姓名。

　　3．短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入5個(gè)句子中。

　　[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

　　句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

　　參考詞匯：快速公交系統(tǒng)BRT

　　高架橋overpass

　　Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　第二節(jié)：讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)

　　閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.

　　One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.

　　She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn't need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.

　　【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

　　1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；

　　2．然后以約120個(gè)詞就“父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括；

　　（1）請(qǐng)舉一個(gè)你或你周圍的周學(xué)得到父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)的事例；

　　（2）談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。

　　【寫(xiě)作要求】

　　1．在作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

　　【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

　　概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

　　1、Editor,

　　I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.

　　Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.

　　But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.

　　2、Editor,

　　I'm writing to talk about the construction project which is going on in our city.

　　Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people. Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because they can not only solve some traffic problems which is becoming worse and worse, but also help to make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, they think that it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.

　　But others are against it, saying that they the project may cause air pollution. They also believe the noise produced by the project will disturb people's peaceful life. Personally, I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and the people. If we focus our attention on the environment, all of us will lead a better life in the future.

　　第二節(jié)：讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)：

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

　　What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".

　　As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.

　　The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.