湖北省2024高考英語二輪（完成句子+書面表達）專題訓練（16）及答案
湖北省2024高考英語二輪（完成句子+書面表達）專題訓練（16）及答案
湖北省2024高考英語二輪復習書面表達專題訓練：
完成句子+短文寫作（6）
第一節：完成句子
閱讀下列各小題，根據括號內的漢語提示，用句末括號內的英語單詞完成句子。
1．The 26 th Shenzhen Summer Universiade was grandly opened on August 12 th．___________ （最吸引我們的） was the door to the world formed by the 365 electronic giant LED screen．（appeal）
2．—Have you seen the film Under the Hawthorn Tree?
—Of course, I have．It was in our village that __________（拍攝的）．（make）
3．Not until I turned on TV
__
（我知道） that the Chinese ship was rescued by the European Union Task Force．
4．Advertisements have become part of everyday life so it is important that we educate ourselves about them ___________ （避免受愚弄）by them．（avoid） ．
5．I ___________ （多虧了我的父母） that I went through the hard time after I lost my job．Everything couldn’t have been going so smoothly without them．（owe）
6．It’s important for the figures
（更新）regularly．（update）
7．________ （全心投入）your job and finally you will succeed．?（devote）
8．The secretary forgot to type her business letter, _____________（集中注意力去閱讀）an interesting report．（focus）
9．He made a commitment that he would spend as much time as he could __________（教這位調皮的孩子）．（teach）
0．However, Australia has a federal government ____________（負責） matters that affect people all over the country such as defence, foreign policy and taxation．（responsible）
為提高單位介紹式書面表達的照應性，我們應寫好開篇交待句和末尾總結句。寫開篇交待句時，因單位詳情尚未交待，讀者對其沒有完整了解，可適當寫得籠統一些，但寫末尾總結句時因單位詳情已作介紹，讀者對其已有完整了解，因此適宜寫得具體一些，針對性強一些。如本篇書面表達習作的開頭和結尾一句就有效增強了文章的照應性。 （未完待續） 怎樣寫好單位介紹式書面表達②
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作者：郝昌明
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更新時間：2004-12-31
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三、用好過渡性詞匯，提高文章的連貫性
寫單位介紹式書面表達交待地點變換時可用：here, there, on the one side, on the other side；寫單位今昔對比、轉換時間時可用：in the past, at present, in the future；寫單位具有多種優勢時可用：at the same time, both...and..., not only...but also..., as well (as), what's more；寫單位因人們的努力而更加輝煌時可用：as a result (of) , thanks to, so, therefore, as we can imagine；對單位前景表達自信時可用：I'm sure, I believe, I think 等過渡性插入語。當然和寫其它角度書面表達一樣，也要根據需要應用好其它過渡性詞匯。
本篇書面表達習作實例參考答案成功運用了As we all know, and, I'm sure等過渡性詞匯，有效增強了文章的連貫性、邏輯性和可讀性。
四、采用具有自我特色的不同表達方式，提高文章的靈活性
寫單位介紹式書面表達時同學們會發現原材料中多次出現"有"，介紹單位不同時期的面積和人口時，也會多次出現"面積為......"、"人口為......"等文字。所有這些意義上重復的場合，語言上最好不要機械重復，否則文章便會顯得機械、呆板，毫無可讀性。同學們應盡可能采用不同的表達方式，使文章顯得形象生動，而具有較強的吸引性。如在介紹單位各方面情況的文章中，多次出現"有"，可用下列句式機動靈活地表達：There are many buildings in our school including... Our school is made up of three grades and thirty-six classes. You can see lots of flowers and green grass in our school.人口和面積可表達為：The population of our school is... Our school has a population of... The size of our school is... Our school has a size of...或Our school covers...
本篇書面表達習作實例參考答案分別用is made up of, covering和has來表達"有"，使得句式絢麗多姿、豐富多彩，大大提高了語言的靈活性。
五、熟悉具有自我特色的語言現象，提高文章的吸引性
單位介紹式書面表達有不少句型是有規律出現的，如列舉單位多個建筑物時可使用： There are many buildings in our school such as a teaching building, a library, a laboratory and a computer center.介紹單位綠化工作做得好時可使用：Our school is like a garden. Trees and flowers can be seen everywhere.介紹單位有關人員努力工作時可用：Both...and...work hard.表達主人公以單位為榮時可用：I'm proud of our school. 介紹單位地點時可用：Our school lies...介紹單位交通狀況時可用：It is very convenient for us to travel anywhere. 介紹單位資源豐富時可用：Our country is rich in natural resources.介紹單位新氣象時可用：Our school has taken on a new look. 介紹單位前途時可用：Our school will have a wonderful future.
本篇書面表達習作參考答案出現了Western China is rich in natural resources, Western China will take on a new look and have a bright future等具有自我特色的句型，有力地提高了文章的吸引性。
六、采用較復雜的詞匯或句式，提升文章的表達檔次
寫單位介紹式書面表達時同學們應盡可能使用一些較復雜的語法結構和詞匯，以降低文章的單調性、枯燥性和乏味性，增強文章的生動性、趣味性和醒目性，從而有效提升文章的表達檔次。如在單位介紹式書面表達中同學們可使用下列一些復雜語法結構和詞匯。
What a beautiful school it is! (運用感嘆句) It is because of the hard work of all the teachers that our school has become very famous.(采用強調句型) Our school is just like a beautiful garden with a lot of flowers and green grass in it.（采用with復合結構）I'm sure you'll be deeply impressed by our school after you visit it. (采用被動語態)
這些句型復現率高，使用效果好，同學們如能熟記并增強表達意識，就一定能做到即學即用，即用即效。
以上就是有關寫好單位介紹式書面表達的幾點建議，希望同學們認真積累、積極思考，寫好文章，以順利通過書面表達這一關。
********************************************************結束
第二節：寫作
如果有一場神奇的“價值拍賣會”，你可以拍下自己最想要的東西，你會為什么而舉牌？請在以下的競拍內容中，選出你最想得到的三樣東西，并闡明你選擇的理由。
1、競拍內容：愛心、夢想、名牌大學錄取通知書、聰明、快樂、誠信、自由、權利、友情、金錢等；
2、字數120左右，不含開頭語。
Different people may bid for different things．_________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
***********************************************************結束
1．What appealed to us most
2．it was made devoted to
3．did I know reading
4．to avoid being fooled
5．owe（d） it to my parents
6．to be updated7．Devote yourself to / Be8．focusing her attention on9．teaching this naughty child0．（that/which is） responsible for
One possible version:
Different people may bid for different things．As for me, I want dream, friendship and an admission notice to a famous university most．
Dreams would be on the top of my list．Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life．Money can buy a comfortable life, but without dreams, even a millionaire would find his life boring．
A person without friends can never be happy．Our life is full of joys and sorrows, which we need people to share with．Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help．Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”．Friendship can help us through ups and downs of life, so friendship would be in my list as well．
After working hard for so many years, I deserve to go to a good university, because being admitted to a famous university can help me live up to my parents’ expectations and bring me a bright future．
湖北省2024高考英語二輪（完成句子+書面表達）專題訓練（16）及答案
湖北省2024高考英語二輪復習書面表達專題訓練：
完成句子+短文寫作（6）
第一節：完成句子
閱讀下列各小題，根據括號內的漢語提示，用句末括號內的英語單詞完成句子。
1．The 26 th Shenzhen Summer Universiade was grandly opened on August 12 th．___________ （最吸引我們的） was the door to the world formed by the 365 electronic giant LED screen．（appeal）
2．—Have you seen the film Under the Hawthorn Tree?
—Of course, I have．It was in our village that __________（拍攝的）．（make）
3．Not until I turned on TV
__
（我知道） that the Chinese ship was rescued by the European Union Task Force．
4．Advertisements have become part of everyday life so it is important that we educate ourselves about them ___________ （避免受愚弄）by them．（avoid） ．
5．I ___________ （多虧了我的父母） that I went through the hard time after I lost my job．Everything couldn’t have been going so smoothly without them．（owe）
6．It’s important for the figures
（更新）regularly．（update）
7．________ （全心投入）your job and finally you will succeed．?（devote）
8．The secretary forgot to type her business letter, _____________（集中注意力去閱讀）an interesting report．（focus）
9．He made a commitment that he would spend as much time as he could __________（教這位調皮的孩子）．（teach）
0．However, Australia has a federal government ____________（負責） matters that affect people all over the country such as defence, foreign policy and taxation．（responsible）
為提高單位介紹式書面表達的照應性，我們應寫好開篇交待句和末尾總結句。寫開篇交待句時，因單位詳情尚未交待，讀者對其沒有完整了解，可適當寫得籠統一些，但寫末尾總結句時因單位詳情已作介紹，讀者對其已有完整了解，因此適宜寫得具體一些，針對性強一些。如本篇書面表達習作的開頭和結尾一句就有效增強了文章的照應性。 （未完待續） 怎樣寫好單位介紹式書面表達②
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作者：郝昌明
轉貼自：本站原創
點擊數：44
更新時間：2004-12-31
文章錄入：admin
減小字體 增大字體
三、用好過渡性詞匯，提高文章的連貫性
寫單位介紹式書面表達交待地點變換時可用：here, there, on the one side, on the other side；寫單位今昔對比、轉換時間時可用：in the past, at present, in the future；寫單位具有多種優勢時可用：at the same time, both...and..., not only...but also..., as well (as), what's more；寫單位因人們的努力而更加輝煌時可用：as a result (of) , thanks to, so, therefore, as we can imagine；對單位前景表達自信時可用：I'm sure, I believe, I think 等過渡性插入語。當然和寫其它角度書面表達一樣，也要根據需要應用好其它過渡性詞匯。
本篇書面表達習作實例參考答案成功運用了As we all know, and, I'm sure等過渡性詞匯，有效增強了文章的連貫性、邏輯性和可讀性。
四、采用具有自我特色的不同表達方式，提高文章的靈活性
寫單位介紹式書面表達時同學們會發現原材料中多次出現"有"，介紹單位不同時期的面積和人口時，也會多次出現"面積為......"、"人口為......"等文字。所有這些意義上重復的場合，語言上最好不要機械重復，否則文章便會顯得機械、呆板，毫無可讀性。同學們應盡可能采用不同的表達方式，使文章顯得形象生動，而具有較強的吸引性。如在介紹單位各方面情況的文章中，多次出現"有"，可用下列句式機動靈活地表達：There are many buildings in our school including... Our school is made up of three grades and thirty-six classes. You can see lots of flowers and green grass in our school.人口和面積可表達為：The population of our school is... Our school has a population of... The size of our school is... Our school has a size of...或Our school covers...
本篇書面表達習作實例參考答案分別用is made up of, covering和has來表達"有"，使得句式絢麗多姿、豐富多彩，大大提高了語言的靈活性。
五、熟悉具有自我特色的語言現象，提高文章的吸引性
單位介紹式書面表達有不少句型是有規律出現的，如列舉單位多個建筑物時可使用： There are many buildings in our school such as a teaching building, a library, a laboratory and a computer center.介紹單位綠化工作做得好時可使用：Our school is like a garden. Trees and flowers can be seen everywhere.介紹單位有關人員努力工作時可用：Both...and...work hard.表達主人公以單位為榮時可用：I'm proud of our school. 介紹單位地點時可用：Our school lies...介紹單位交通狀況時可用：It is very convenient for us to travel anywhere. 介紹單位資源豐富時可用：Our country is rich in natural resources.介紹單位新氣象時可用：Our school has taken on a new look. 介紹單位前途時可用：Our school will have a wonderful future.
本篇書面表達習作參考答案出現了Western China is rich in natural resources, Western China will take on a new look and have a bright future等具有自我特色的句型，有力地提高了文章的吸引性。
六、采用較復雜的詞匯或句式，提升文章的表達檔次
寫單位介紹式書面表達時同學們應盡可能使用一些較復雜的語法結構和詞匯，以降低文章的單調性、枯燥性和乏味性，增強文章的生動性、趣味性和醒目性，從而有效提升文章的表達檔次。如在單位介紹式書面表達中同學們可使用下列一些復雜語法結構和詞匯。
What a beautiful school it is! (運用感嘆句) It is because of the hard work of all the teachers that our school has become very famous.(采用強調句型) Our school is just like a beautiful garden with a lot of flowers and green grass in it.（采用with復合結構）I'm sure you'll be deeply impressed by our school after you visit it. (采用被動語態)
這些句型復現率高，使用效果好，同學們如能熟記并增強表達意識，就一定能做到即學即用，即用即效。
以上就是有關寫好單位介紹式書面表達的幾點建議，希望同學們認真積累、積極思考，寫好文章，以順利通過書面表達這一關。
********************************************************結束
第二節：寫作
如果有一場神奇的“價值拍賣會”，你可以拍下自己最想要的東西，你會為什么而舉牌？請在以下的競拍內容中，選出你最想得到的三樣東西，并闡明你選擇的理由。
1、競拍內容：愛心、夢想、名牌大學錄取通知書、聰明、快樂、誠信、自由、權利、友情、金錢等；
2、字數120左右，不含開頭語。
Different people may bid for different things．_________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
***********************************************************結束
1．What appealed to us most
2．it was made devoted to
3．did I know reading
4．to avoid being fooled
5．owe（d） it to my parents
6．to be updated7．Devote yourself to / Be8．focusing her attention on9．teaching this naughty child0．（that/which is） responsible for
One possible version:
Different people may bid for different things．As for me, I want dream, friendship and an admission notice to a famous university most．
Dreams would be on the top of my list．Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life．Money can buy a comfortable life, but without dreams, even a millionaire would find his life boring．
A person without friends can never be happy．Our life is full of joys and sorrows, which we need people to share with．Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help．Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”．Friendship can help us through ups and downs of life, so friendship would be in my list as well．
After working hard for so many years, I deserve to go to a good university, because being admitted to a famous university can help me live up to my parents’ expectations and bring me a bright future．
