2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選短文改錯58

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　　高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯

　　1.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world．He set up a company and researching the computer software．An old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher．” I quite agree with this idea．I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs．To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day．It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day．As a result, I always did very well in English exam．Interest is the key of success．

　　2.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：

　　1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very

　　crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy

　　in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be

　　sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with

　　the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.

　　Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This

　　uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have

　　heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

　　4.第三部分:寫作(共兩節,滿分40分)

　　第一節:短文改錯(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯誤.請在有錯誤的地方增加刪除或修改某個單詞.

　　增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞.

　　刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉.

　　修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在改詞下面寫上修改后的詞.

　　注意:1.每次錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

　　2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.

　　例如:

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧ weekend with you.Luckily

　　the

　　I was completely then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00p.m

　　in Friday evening

　　Dear Diary,

　　Here I am in the middle of a city 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else.I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I an awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep.

　　Good night and remember you .dear diary.is my only souvenir from. Me past the end only friend.

　　Yours,

　　Roedmary

　　第二節:書面表達滿分(30分)

　　請以“One Thing I’m Pround

　　of”為題,用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文.記述一件你自己認為得意的事情.要求如下:

　　記述事情經過;

　　簡要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示.

　　注意:文章的標題已給出(不計詞數).

　　One Thing I’m pround of

　　5.第三部分寫作（共兩頁，滿分35分）

　　第一節短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：把缺詞處加一個漏符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.

　　第二節書面表達（滿分25分）

　　假定你是李華，自制一些中國結（Chinese knot）。給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要點包括：

　　1.外觀（尺寸、顏色、材料）

　　2.象征意義

　　3.價格

　　注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.開頭語已為你寫好。

　　第一節：

　　6.I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

　　I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

　　試卷答案

　　1.In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, ∧richest man in the world, gave up

　　the

　　studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world．He set up a company and researching the computer software．An old saying go, “Interest researched或去掉and

　　goes

　　is the best teacher．” I quite agree with this idea．I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs．xtremely

　　and

　　To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day．It seemed to be the best“meal” of a day．As a result, I always did very well in English exam．Interest is theexams

　　key of success．

　　2.1.story后加that/ which, 2. classmate — classmates, 3.enjoy 后加the, 4.our—their, 5.are—were, 6.but—and, 7.before—after, 8.to realize 去掉to, 9.strong—strongly, 10.pays—pay

　　This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a

　　bus. It was very

　　刪除

　　crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy

　　Beside

　　holding

　　in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be

　　occupied

　　sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with

　　curiously

　　the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.

　　that或去掉if

　　Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This

　　uncle must∧very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have

　　heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at

　　words

　　once.

　　5.第二節

　　1.holding----hold

　　此處used to意為：過去常常，to是不定式符號，故用動詞原形。

　　2.passes----passed

　　根據前面was可知為一般過去時態。

　　3.much----well/ clearly

　　根據句意可知，我很清楚記得我的爺爺。此處very much是多的意思，不合題意。

　　4.shoulder----shoulders

　　根據常理，人有兩個肩膀，故用復數。

　　5.toward----to/ into

　　根據句意，這里指：黑胡子變成白胡子。所以用短語turn to或turn into。

　　6.himself----him

　　句意：他的深沉的聲音把他和別人區別開來。故用him。

　　7.he前加and

　　根據句中結構可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列關系，故用and連接。

　　8.去掉fact前a

　　固定短語：in fact。

　　9.during----when

　　during為介詞，后不能接句子；應用when這個連詞引導時間狀語從句。

　　10.never----ever

　　語義錯誤。根據句意：他是我認識的最溫柔的人。可知將never改為ever。