福建省2024屆高考英語二輪專題總復(fù)習(xí)課件:專題6 第1講 提綱類
第1講
提綱類
提綱類作文分為提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)和提供部分寫作要點(diǎn)。提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)的作文要求考生根據(jù)給定的內(nèi)容,在增加適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上,寫出一篇內(nèi)容完整的短文。提供部分寫作要點(diǎn)的作文是命題者給出了部分寫作內(nèi)容,同時(shí)又要求考生根據(jù)提示作一定程度的合理發(fā)揮,具有一定的開放性。
提綱類作文是高考常考題型,也是最為基本的考查考生寫作能力的題型,學(xué)生寫好這類作文是寫好其他類型作文的基礎(chǔ)。這類試題通常考查的是根據(jù)提示語寫短文、書信、演講、報(bào)道、介紹和說明人物或情況等,以檢查考生是否掌握所學(xué)文體的基本格式。
具體寫作時(shí),同學(xué)們還應(yīng)注意以下兩個(gè)方面:
1. 有時(shí)提綱類作文所提供的要點(diǎn)順序并非就是寫作時(shí)的順序,因此,寫作前先將要點(diǎn)標(biāo)出,并按照一定的邏輯關(guān)系,如時(shí)間順序、空間順序、事件發(fā)生的先后順序等,把這些要點(diǎn)排列并整理好。
2. 提綱類作文不是簡單地把漢語提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文,不能簡單地直譯。考生要用平時(shí)自己最有把握的單詞、短語和句型,圍繞主題,將意思完整清楚地表達(dá)出來。在遇到自己想不起來或找不著相應(yīng)的英語詞匯或句型時(shí),學(xué)會用相近的句子來表達(dá)。
一、問題解決型
In recent days, we have to face a problem A,_which is becoming more and more serious. First說明A的現(xiàn)狀. Second, 舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀.
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, 解決方法一. For another thing, 解決方法二. Finally, 解決方法三.
Personally, I believe that我的解決方法. I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because帶來的好處.
二、積極有利型
Nowadays, 主題plays an important role in our life. For example,舉例說明主題的現(xiàn)狀.
Generally, its advantages can be listed as follows. First,好處一. Besides, 好處二.
Through the above analysis, my attitude toward this matter is positive, and the reasons are simple. It not only brings us 好處之一, but also gives us 好處之二 we have not expected.
Therefore, I can see its bright future from now on.
本文為應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作,屬傳統(tǒng)的指導(dǎo)性寫作。寫好此文,需注意以下幾點(diǎn):一是時(shí)態(tài)把握要準(zhǔn)確。文章基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),同時(shí)兼顧其他的時(shí)態(tài)。二是要點(diǎn)要齊全,且詳略得當(dāng)。題目已給出了較為詳盡的寫作要求,要點(diǎn)作出了明確的規(guī)定,這些要點(diǎn)不能有遺漏。寫作重點(diǎn)可放在報(bào)紙優(yōu)點(diǎn)的介紹上面。三是切忌照譯,要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié),恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞,使行文連貫流暢。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_ Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua 【作文點(diǎn)評】
文章要點(diǎn)齊全,寫作層次清楚,時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)正確,較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。作者能緊扣要點(diǎn)框架適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié),文中銜接詞語,如first, equally, and, as a young student等的使用使文章前后連貫,承接自然。倒裝句(Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people),非限定性定語從句(which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place)及虛擬語氣(that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning)等復(fù)雜句式的使用也給文章增色不少。
第1講
提綱類
提綱類作文分為提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)和提供部分寫作要點(diǎn)。提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)的作文要求考生根據(jù)給定的內(nèi)容,在增加適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上,寫出一篇內(nèi)容完整的短文。提供部分寫作要點(diǎn)的作文是命題者給出了部分寫作內(nèi)容,同時(shí)又要求考生根據(jù)提示作一定程度的合理發(fā)揮,具有一定的開放性。
提綱類作文是高考常考題型,也是最為基本的考查考生寫作能力的題型,學(xué)生寫好這類作文是寫好其他類型作文的基礎(chǔ)。這類試題通??疾榈氖歉鶕?jù)提示語寫短文、書信、演講、報(bào)道、介紹和說明人物或情況等,以檢查考生是否掌握所學(xué)文體的基本格式。
具體寫作時(shí),同學(xué)們還應(yīng)注意以下兩個(gè)方面:
1. 有時(shí)提綱類作文所提供的要點(diǎn)順序并非就是寫作時(shí)的順序,因此,寫作前先將要點(diǎn)標(biāo)出,并按照一定的邏輯關(guān)系,如時(shí)間順序、空間順序、事件發(fā)生的先后順序等,把這些要點(diǎn)排列并整理好。
2. 提綱類作文不是簡單地把漢語提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文,不能簡單地直譯??忌闷綍r(shí)自己最有把握的單詞、短語和句型,圍繞主題,將意思完整清楚地表達(dá)出來。在遇到自己想不起來或找不著相應(yīng)的英語詞匯或句型時(shí),學(xué)會用相近的句子來表達(dá)。
一、問題解決型
In recent days, we have to face a problem A,_which is becoming more and more serious. First說明A的現(xiàn)狀. Second, 舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀.
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, 解決方法一. For another thing, 解決方法二. Finally, 解決方法三.
Personally, I believe that我的解決方法. I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because帶來的好處.
二、積極有利型
Nowadays, 主題plays an important role in our life. For example,舉例說明主題的現(xiàn)狀.
Generally, its advantages can be listed as follows. First,好處一. Besides, 好處二.
Through the above analysis, my attitude toward this matter is positive, and the reasons are simple. It not only brings us 好處之一, but also gives us 好處之二 we have not expected.
Therefore, I can see its bright future from now on.
本文為應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作,屬傳統(tǒng)的指導(dǎo)性寫作。寫好此文,需注意以下幾點(diǎn):一是時(shí)態(tài)把握要準(zhǔn)確。文章基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),同時(shí)兼顧其他的時(shí)態(tài)。二是要點(diǎn)要齊全,且詳略得當(dāng)。題目已給出了較為詳盡的寫作要求,要點(diǎn)作出了明確的規(guī)定,這些要點(diǎn)不能有遺漏。寫作重點(diǎn)可放在報(bào)紙優(yōu)點(diǎn)的介紹上面。三是切忌照譯,要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié),恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞,使行文連貫流暢。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_ Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua 【作文點(diǎn)評】
文章要點(diǎn)齊全,寫作層次清楚,時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)正確,較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。作者能緊扣要點(diǎn)框架適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié),文中銜接詞語,如first, equally, and, as a young student等的使用使文章前后連貫,承接自然。倒裝句(Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people),非限定性定語從句(which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place)及虛擬語氣(that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning)等復(fù)雜句式的使用也給文章增色不少。