2024屆高考一輪復(fù)習(xí)英語同步練習(xí)：短文改錯練習(xí)（4）
2024高考英語：短文改錯練習(xí)（4）及答案解析
【英語卷（解析）·2024屆河北省石家莊二中高三開學(xué)考試（202408）】
第三節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience
【答案】【知識點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯記敘文
【】
【答案解析】
1. importance
考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我們的生活中非常的重要。Be of importance 等于 be
important 。
2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短語。Wait for sth 等待。。
3. past-passed
考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：30分鐘過去了，但沒有一輛車來。根據(jù)but no bus came用一般過去時。
4. on foot
考查固定短語。句意：沮喪又著急，我決定步行去。On foot 步行
5. when-than
考查固定句型。No sooner ...than 一。。就
6. take the next bus
考查固定短語。 句意：如果我選擇下一輛車的話，我還得再等待三十分鐘。The next bus 下一趟車。
7. another 30 minutes
考查搭配。句意：如果我選擇下一輛車的話，我還得再等待三十分鐘。Another 30 minutes 再三十分鐘。
8. did I realize
考查倒裝 句意：只有這時我才意識到我的問題。Only +狀語 +部分倒裝 。
9. put后it去掉
考查定語從句。句意：耐心會浪費(fèi)掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定語從句。
10. losing
考查固定短語。Close to 靠近, to是介詞，故后面用動名詞的形式。
【英語卷(解析)·2024屆河北省衡水中學(xué)高三小一調(diào)考試（202408）掃描版】
第三節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10出語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。
It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school. I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so series overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. In my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then did I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
【答案】【知識點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯記敘文
【文章綜述】文章講述的是好習(xí)慣會讓人受益終生，作者的減肥之路。
【答案解析】
Entered---Entering
考查非謂語動詞。句意：我進(jìn)入高中，我很喜歡吃快餐并且吃得很多 。兩個句子共用一個主語I ，與enter之間是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的形式。
eat—ate
考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：我進(jìn)入高中，我很喜歡吃快餐并且吃得很多。Took與eat由and來連接，兩個動詞的時態(tài)保持一致。
serious—seriously
考查副詞。句意：我非常胖以致于外表很丑陋。Seriously用來修飾形容詞overweight.
It ---what
考查主語從句。句意：更糟糕的是同學(xué)們經(jīng)常嘲笑我。What made matters worse引導(dǎo)主語從句。
去掉a
考查固定短語。Make fun of 取笑某人。
now—then
考查時間狀語。句意：從那時起，我下決心不吃零食。根據(jù)句意，從那時起。
avoiding---avoid 考查動詞短語。Make up one’s mind to do 下定決心做某事；
off—up
考查固定短語。句意：與此同時，我開始慢跑減肥。Take off 關(guān)掉；take up 從事。
In—To
考查固定短語。To one’s surprise 使某人感到吃驚的是。
until---before
考查連詞。句意：不久之后 ，我轉(zhuǎn)型成功。It was not long before ….不久之后。
短文改錯
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about
77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources
82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85.____________
【參考答案-----】改錯:
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about
77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources
82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85. them
短文改錯
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost
76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry?
77.
Experts have found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When one is feeling stressed, it set free,
79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get
80.
rid of the stress and you will often feel better before a
81.
good cry. Of course sex has nothing to do to crying.
82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more
83.
of this hormone than men. But next time you feel like
84.
bursting into tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health.
85.
【參考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容詞作表語。
77．√
78．tear → tears。動詞contain為復(fù)數(shù)形式，主語也應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式。
79．it后加is。此處應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)。
80．get → getting。of為介詞，后面應(yīng)接動名詞作賓語。
81．before → after。哭后的感覺比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。從句不可用because of而應(yīng)用because來引導(dǎo)。
84．But → So。分析語境邏輯可知，此處不表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
85．won't → will．
(2024·昆明市適應(yīng)性檢測)
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.
答案：
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people
crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad
be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as
example. Only after his hard
did he become successful.
we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is
the process in which
try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
(2024·浙江省五校聯(lián)考)
A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
答案：
A young man called LowCarbon Brother
a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help
carbon dioxide in the air. For example,
always picks up some waste paper on the street
uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns
the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a
life with so many modern
around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support
his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,
he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
短文改錯--1
At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my
77. ____________
friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong.
78. ____________
It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the
79. ____________
food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new
80. ____________
clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher,
81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese
82. ____________
New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to
84. ____________
start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long!
85. ____________
書面表達(dá) （滿分30分）
61. bunch
62. praise
63. permission
64. blame
65. consideration
66. differs
67. familiar
68. relief
69. delivered
70. gradually
71. misled
72. length
73. promoting
74.appointed
75. annoyed
76. have改為had
77. 此行無錯。
78. the改為a。
79. and改為but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改為shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改為surprise。
83. excited改為exciting。
84. 去掉第二個so。
85. long改為longer。
2024高考英語：短文改錯練習(xí)（4）及答案解析
【英語卷（解析）·2024屆河北省石家莊二中高三開學(xué)考試（202408）】
第三節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience
【答案】【知識點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯記敘文
【】
【答案解析】
1. importance
考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我們的生活中非常的重要。Be of importance 等于 be
important 。
2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短語。Wait for sth 等待。。
3. past-passed
考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：30分鐘過去了，但沒有一輛車來。根據(jù)but no bus came用一般過去時。
4. on foot
考查固定短語。句意：沮喪又著急，我決定步行去。On foot 步行
5. when-than
考查固定句型。No sooner ...than 一。。就
6. take the next bus
考查固定短語。 句意：如果我選擇下一輛車的話，我還得再等待三十分鐘。The next bus 下一趟車。
7. another 30 minutes
考查搭配。句意：如果我選擇下一輛車的話，我還得再等待三十分鐘。Another 30 minutes 再三十分鐘。
8. did I realize
考查倒裝 句意：只有這時我才意識到我的問題。Only +狀語 +部分倒裝 。
9. put后it去掉
考查定語從句。句意：耐心會浪費(fèi)掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定語從句。
10. losing
考查固定短語。Close to 靠近, to是介詞，故后面用動名詞的形式。
【英語卷(解析)·2024屆河北省衡水中學(xué)高三小一調(diào)考試（202408）掃描版】
第三節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10出語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。
It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school. I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so series overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. In my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then did I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
【答案】【知識點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯記敘文
【文章綜述】文章講述的是好習(xí)慣會讓人受益終生，作者的減肥之路。
【答案解析】
Entered---Entering
考查非謂語動詞。句意：我進(jìn)入高中，我很喜歡吃快餐并且吃得很多 。兩個句子共用一個主語I ，與enter之間是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的形式。
eat—ate
考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：我進(jìn)入高中，我很喜歡吃快餐并且吃得很多。Took與eat由and來連接，兩個動詞的時態(tài)保持一致。
serious—seriously
考查副詞。句意：我非常胖以致于外表很丑陋。Seriously用來修飾形容詞overweight.
It ---what
考查主語從句。句意：更糟糕的是同學(xué)們經(jīng)常嘲笑我。What made matters worse引導(dǎo)主語從句。
去掉a
考查固定短語。Make fun of 取笑某人。
now—then
考查時間狀語。句意：從那時起，我下決心不吃零食。根據(jù)句意，從那時起。
avoiding---avoid 考查動詞短語。Make up one’s mind to do 下定決心做某事；
off—up
考查固定短語。句意：與此同時，我開始慢跑減肥。Take off 關(guān)掉；take up 從事。
In—To
考查固定短語。To one’s surprise 使某人感到吃驚的是。
until---before
考查連詞。句意：不久之后 ，我轉(zhuǎn)型成功。It was not long before ….不久之后。
短文改錯
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.____________
people were becoming more and more careful about
77._____________
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____________
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79.____________
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.____________
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.____________
health ,we should take good care our water resources
82.____________
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____________
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.____________
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85.____________
【參考答案-----】改錯:
I am worker at the tap water company. I find that
76.______a ______
people were becoming more and more careful about
77.______are____
health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear
78.____appears_
and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.
79._____or_____
Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the
80.__Unfortunately_
protection of water resources .For the sake of our
81.___ √_____
health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources
82.______of___
and environment .There is a saying “whether we do
83.____if_____
not careful protect our environment the last drops
84.___careful___
of water we will see them will be our own tears.”
85. them
短文改錯
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost
76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry?
77.
Experts have found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When one is feeling stressed, it set free,
79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get
80.
rid of the stress and you will often feel better before a
81.
good cry. Of course sex has nothing to do to crying.
82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more
83.
of this hormone than men. But next time you feel like
84.
bursting into tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health.
85.
【參考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容詞作表語。
77．√
78．tear → tears。動詞contain為復(fù)數(shù)形式，主語也應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式。
79．it后加is。此處應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)。
80．get → getting。of為介詞，后面應(yīng)接動名詞作賓語。
81．before → after。哭后的感覺比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。從句不可用because of而應(yīng)用because來引導(dǎo)。
84．But → So。分析語境邏輯可知，此處不表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
85．won't → will．
(2024·昆明市適應(yīng)性檢測)
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.
答案：
We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people
crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad
be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as
example. Only after his hard
did he become successful.
we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is
the process in which
try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
(2024·浙江省五校聯(lián)考)
A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
答案：
A young man called LowCarbon Brother
a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help
carbon dioxide in the air. For example,
always picks up some waste paper on the street
uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns
the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a
life with so many modern
around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support
his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,
he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
短文改錯--1
At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy 76._____________
time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my
77. ____________
friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong.
78. ____________
It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the
79. ____________
food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new
80. ____________
clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher,
81. ____________
Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese
82. ____________
New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________
Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to
84. ____________
start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long!
85. ____________
書面表達(dá) （滿分30分）
61. bunch
62. praise
63. permission
64. blame
65. consideration
66. differs
67. familiar
68. relief
69. delivered
70. gradually
71. misled
72. length
73. promoting
74.appointed
75. annoyed
76. have改為had
77. 此行無錯。
78. the改為a。
79. and改為but。
80. 去掉to/shopping 改為shop。
81. lots 后加of。
82. surprised 改為surprise。
83. excited改為exciting。
84. 去掉第二個so。
85. long改為longer。
