2024屆高考英語一輪復習寫作指導課件：子潤色 簡單句的高級形式（新人教版）

　　簡單句其實也可以不簡單，若將簡單句與非謂語動詞短語、形容詞短語、介詞短語、同位語、獨立主格結構等巧妙地合并在一起，不但可以表達更豐富的內容，而且也使句子變得更精彩，充分顯示你在英語表達上的實力。以下各句摘自近年各省市高考寫作范文的高級簡單句，請欣賞、熟記、模仿： 句子潤色：簡單句的高級形式 1. 同位語。 I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine.我想有一個筆友, 希望是一個二十出頭且興趣相投的女孩子。(同位語中又有兩個并列的介詞短語修飾) (全國) Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.出生于美國的托馬斯·愛迪生是一個偉大的科學家和發明家。(湖南) 2. 形容詞短語。 In order to study well, we need to do sports.為了學習好, 我們需要做體育運動。(遼寧) 3. 不定式短語。 In this picture, a mother bird stays

　　in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away.在這幅圖中, 一個鳥媽媽待在一棵大樹的鳥巢里, 觀看她的鳥仔飛走。(北京) 4. 現在分詞短語。 Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient.與信件和公用電話相比,手機和網絡更快也更方便。(廣東) 5. 過去分詞短語。

　　Instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves.他鼓勵我們獨立思考, 而不是馬上告訴我們答案。(湖南) 6. 介詞短語。

　　1. Amy Chua, 美籍華人, 耶魯大學教授。(同位語) (廣東) Amy Chua, a Chinese American, works as a professor in Yale University. [即學即用] 2. 課外活動不僅可以強健我們的身體和豐富我們的知識, 而且還把我們從繁重的學習中解放出來。(介詞短語)(四川) Besides building up oue bodies and enriching our knowledge, after- class activities also free us from heavy study burden. 3. 因為完全忙于自己的學習, 我很少注意到媽媽的感覺和所需要。(過去分詞短語) (江蘇) Totally engaged in my study, I seldom pay attention to what my mother feel and needs. 4. 小車已成為受人歡迎的交通方式,

　　給人們的生活帶來了方便。(現在分詞短語) (江西) Cars have become a popular means

　　of tranport, bringing conveniences to people’s life. 5. 我們學生應當通過努力學習而不是考試作弊來獲得好成績。(介詞短語) (福建) We students should try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. 6. 合并句子:

　　(1)She realizes her mom must be very tired after a day’s work . (2)The girl helps to remove the bag from her mom’s shoulder. (現在分詞短語) Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. 7. 合并句子： (1) The book was entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother . (2) The book was written by Amy Chua. (3)The book came out in 2011. (過去分詞短語) The book, entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and written by Amy Chua, came out in 2011.

　　簡單句其實也可以不簡單，若將簡單句與非謂語動詞短語、形容詞短語、介詞短語、同位語、獨立主格結構等巧妙地合并在一起，不但可以表達更豐富的內容，而且也使句子變得更精彩，充分顯示你在英語表達上的實力。以下各句摘自近年各省市高考寫作范文的高級簡單句，請欣賞、熟記、模仿： 句子潤色：簡單句的高級形式 1. 同位語。 I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine.我想有一個筆友, 希望是一個二十出頭且興趣相投的女孩子。(同位語中又有兩個并列的介詞短語修飾) (全國) Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.出生于美國的托馬斯·愛迪生是一個偉大的科學家和發明家。(湖南) 2. 形容詞短語。 In order to study well, we need to do sports.為了學習好, 我們需要做體育運動。(遼寧) 3. 不定式短語。 In this picture, a mother bird stays

　　in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away.在這幅圖中, 一個鳥媽媽待在一棵大樹的鳥巢里, 觀看她的鳥仔飛走。(北京) 4. 現在分詞短語。 Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient.與信件和公用電話相比,手機和網絡更快也更方便。(廣東) 5. 過去分詞短語。

　　Instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves.他鼓勵我們獨立思考, 而不是馬上告訴我們答案。(湖南) 6. 介詞短語。

　　1. Amy Chua, 美籍華人, 耶魯大學教授。(同位語) (廣東) Amy Chua, a Chinese American, works as a professor in Yale University. [即學即用] 2. 課外活動不僅可以強健我們的身體和豐富我們的知識, 而且還把我們從繁重的學習中解放出來。(介詞短語)(四川) Besides building up oue bodies and enriching our knowledge, after- class activities also free us from heavy study burden. 3. 因為完全忙于自己的學習, 我很少注意到媽媽的感覺和所需要。(過去分詞短語) (江蘇) Totally engaged in my study, I seldom pay attention to what my mother feel and needs. 4. 小車已成為受人歡迎的交通方式,

　　給人們的生活帶來了方便。(現在分詞短語) (江西) Cars have become a popular means

　　of tranport, bringing conveniences to people’s life. 5. 我們學生應當通過努力學習而不是考試作弊來獲得好成績。(介詞短語) (福建) We students should try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. 6. 合并句子:

　　(1)She realizes her mom must be very tired after a day’s work . (2)The girl helps to remove the bag from her mom’s shoulder. (現在分詞短語) Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. 7. 合并句子： (1) The book was entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother . (2) The book was written by Amy Chua. (3)The book came out in 2011. (過去分詞短語) The book, entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and written by Amy Chua, came out in 2011.