2024屆高考英語一輪復習《全優課堂》寫作技能步步高寫作層級特訓：要訣4.5.滿分作文登場.邀請信（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要訣四

　　(2005全國卷)

　　假設你是李華，正在英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游。互聯網上的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。以下是該則廣告的信息。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右，信的格已為你寫好。

　　2．可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　3．參考詞匯：牛津 Oxford；費用 fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame，

　　(1)I am a Chinese student and I am taking short-term English training courses in Oxford. I plan ①pay a visit to London on Sunday. I've read your advertisement and have some questions. When will I shop in the tour? Is there any special price for students? (2)Besides, I want to know the entrance fees and lunch arrangement. Is the lunch included in the ￡45?

　　And I am not clear the time to return.

　　I'll appreciate ②that if you can give more information about the day tour to London.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　1. 錯誤聚焦

　　(1)“計劃做某事”的短語是：plan to do sth，故①pay前面應加____________。

　　(2)“如果你可以……我將不甚感激”的句型應該是：I'll appreciate it if you can…，故②that應改為____________。

　　【答案】(1)to　(2)it

　　2．高分靚句

　　(1)將畫線句子(1)改為一個簡單句：____________________________.

　　2)將畫線句子(2)合并成一個句子：Besides, I want to the know whether the ￡45 cover________________________________________________________________________.

　　【答案】

　　(1)I, a Chinese student，am taking short-term English training courses in Oxford

　　(2)the entrance fees and lunch

　　參考范文

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University, I'd like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed and lunch? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I'd like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　假設你是李華，你的英國網友Tom從報紙上看到了有關中國微信的報道，來信向你詢問有關微信的情況，請你以李華的名義寫一封回信，內容包括：

　　1．微信是一種免費應用程序；

　　2．微信的功能：聊天、分享、支付和轉賬；

　　3．微信給人們帶來的好處。

　　微信：WeChat

　　注意：1.詞數：100詞左右；

　　2．可適當增加細節，使行文連貫。

　　Dear Tom,

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　LiHua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Tom,

　　I am very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you showed interest in Chinese WeChat. WeChat is a popular free smart phone application. As long as the smart phone is connected to the Internet, people can use it to chat, post or share photos and articles. Besides, it also has the online payment function. Nowadays many services can be paid through WeChat, which brings users much more convenience. What's more, people can pay back money through WeChat Wallet or by sending others WeChat Red Packet(formerly called “Lucky Money” or “Red Envelopes ). You know, during the Chinese Spring Festival, millions of people spread the joy of giving and receiving red packets. With time going on, I believe WeChat will make our life more beautiful and convenient.

　　Yours，

　　LiHua

　　第三部分　要訣四

　　(2005全國卷)

　　假設你是李華，正在英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游。互聯網上的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。以下是該則廣告的信息。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右，信的格已為你寫好。

　　2．可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　3．參考詞匯：牛津 Oxford；費用 fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame，

　　(1)I am a Chinese student and I am taking short-term English training courses in Oxford. I plan ①pay a visit to London on Sunday. I've read your advertisement and have some questions. When will I shop in the tour? Is there any special price for students? (2)Besides, I want to know the entrance fees and lunch arrangement. Is the lunch included in the ￡45?

　　And I am not clear the time to return.

　　I'll appreciate ②that if you can give more information about the day tour to London.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　1. 錯誤聚焦

　　(1)“計劃做某事”的短語是：plan to do sth，故①pay前面應加____________。

　　(2)“如果你可以……我將不甚感激”的句型應該是：I'll appreciate it if you can…，故②that應改為____________。

　　【答案】(1)to　(2)it

　　2．高分靚句

　　(1)將畫線句子(1)改為一個簡單句：____________________________.

　　2)將畫線句子(2)合并成一個句子：Besides, I want to the know whether the ￡45 cover________________________________________________________________________.

　　【答案】

　　(1)I, a Chinese student，am taking short-term English training courses in Oxford

　　(2)the entrance fees and lunch

　　參考范文

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University, I'd like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed and lunch? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I'd like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　假設你是李華，你的英國網友Tom從報紙上看到了有關中國微信的報道，來信向你詢問有關微信的情況，請你以李華的名義寫一封回信，內容包括：

　　1．微信是一種免費應用程序；

　　2．微信的功能：聊天、分享、支付和轉賬；

　　3．微信給人們帶來的好處。

　　微信：WeChat

　　注意：1.詞數：100詞左右；

　　2．可適當增加細節，使行文連貫。

　　Dear Tom,

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　LiHua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Tom,

　　I am very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you showed interest in Chinese WeChat. WeChat is a popular free smart phone application. As long as the smart phone is connected to the Internet, people can use it to chat, post or share photos and articles. Besides, it also has the online payment function. Nowadays many services can be paid through WeChat, which brings users much more convenience. What's more, people can pay back money through WeChat Wallet or by sending others WeChat Red Packet(formerly called “Lucky Money” or “Red Envelopes ). You know, during the Chinese Spring Festival, millions of people spread the joy of giving and receiving red packets. With time going on, I believe WeChat will make our life more beautiful and convenient.

　　Yours，

　　LiHua