雅思寫作：優(yōu)秀范文閱讀欣賞（1）

　　這是由批改網(wǎng)批改老師經(jīng)過精批范文重寫后的一篇文章，范文重寫前的原始文章是由批改網(wǎng)用戶wangzhuo于6月8日提交的。

　　Topic

　　You recently met a manager from a new company that opened in your town. After the meeting, he wrote to you, offering you a job in this new company. However, you want to stay in your present job. Write a letter to the manager, and include: thanks him for the offer, explain why you want to stay in the present job, recommend a friend to take the job in the new company.

　　Rewritten Sample writing:

　　My sincere apologies for the delay in my response, as I wished to consider your offer in detail.

　　First, I wish to express my gratitude for your generous offer, which was important to me, nevertheless after consideration I believe that I would prefer to stay in my current position.

　　As a structural engineer, the design of economical residential buildings to accommodate general people was a dream of my childhood, and presently I am very fortunate that I am able to fulfill my dreams. As a result, it would be my intention to remain with my present work.

　　At the same time, and this may be of interest to you, I would like to recommend a friend, Bob Gillett, who was a colleague of mine, to apply for the position that you offered me. He is specialized in environmental engineering and has ten years working experience. I believe he would be the perfect candidate for your company. I have also spoken with him in brief and you can contact him directly on 0432783157. I am sure he would be pleased to hear from you.

　　Thank you once more for your kind consideration and with best wishes.

　　這是由批改網(wǎng)批改老師經(jīng)過精批范文重寫后的一篇文章，范文重寫前的原始文章是由批改網(wǎng)用戶wangzhuo于6月8日提交的。

　　Topic

　　You recently met a manager from a new company that opened in your town. After the meeting, he wrote to you, offering you a job in this new company. However, you want to stay in your present job. Write a letter to the manager, and include: thanks him for the offer, explain why you want to stay in the present job, recommend a friend to take the job in the new company.

　　Rewritten Sample writing:

　　My sincere apologies for the delay in my response, as I wished to consider your offer in detail.

　　First, I wish to express my gratitude for your generous offer, which was important to me, nevertheless after consideration I believe that I would prefer to stay in my current position.

　　As a structural engineer, the design of economical residential buildings to accommodate general people was a dream of my childhood, and presently I am very fortunate that I am able to fulfill my dreams. As a result, it would be my intention to remain with my present work.

　　At the same time, and this may be of interest to you, I would like to recommend a friend, Bob Gillett, who was a colleague of mine, to apply for the position that you offered me. He is specialized in environmental engineering and has ten years working experience. I believe he would be the perfect candidate for your company. I have also spoken with him in brief and you can contact him directly on 0432783157. I am sure he would be pleased to hear from you.

　　Thank you once more for your kind consideration and with best wishes.