雅思寫作官方高分范文點評

　　When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and

　　ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To

　　what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　官方給出的高分答案

　　Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that traditional skills and ways of life are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.

　　In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of

　　technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel

　　to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from

　　previous ways of doing things.Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life.

　　Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life. For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmons; it can now be ordered from and delivered to, anywhere in the world.就是靠這個寫作技法獨步文壇。創作出了另世人驚奇的尤利西斯.本文中，考官通過島嶼孩子的例子說明了因特網的好處，同時又用因特網舉出了另外的一個例子。明白這個 寫作思路嗎!A-B B-C C-D D-E，如果沒有篇幅的限制，他可以任意的導出。而且他這次的例子又是那么奇怪，居然說的是因特網以及現代的冷凍技術的應用使得傳統的馬哈魚加工工藝保留了下來。現在，馬哈魚可以在全球達成定購與收購)。

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means pointless, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

　　When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and

　　ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To

　　what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　官方給出的高分答案

　　Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that traditional skills and ways of life are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.

　　In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of

　　technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel

　　to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from

　　previous ways of doing things.Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life.

　　Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life. For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmons; it can now be ordered from and delivered to, anywhere in the world.就是靠這個寫作技法獨步文壇。創作出了另世人驚奇的尤利西斯.本文中，考官通過島嶼孩子的例子說明了因特網的好處，同時又用因特網舉出了另外的一個例子。明白這個 寫作思路嗎!A-B B-C C-D D-E，如果沒有篇幅的限制，他可以任意的導出。而且他這次的例子又是那么奇怪，居然說的是因特網以及現代的冷凍技術的應用使得傳統的馬哈魚加工工藝保留了下來。現在，馬哈魚可以在全球達成定購與收購)。

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means pointless, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.