高考英語作文的滿分范文寫郵件簡述18歲成人宣誓儀式的感受

　　假如你是李華,昨天學校為你們舉辦了18歲成人宣誓儀式.請根據下列要點給你在美國的筆友發一封電子郵件,描述宣誓儀式過程并簡述你的感受.

　　要點:1.宣誓儀式;2.感謝家長和老師的培養和教育;3.老師送賀卡;4.表演節目

　　注意:1.郵件必須包括以上要點,可適當發揮;2.詞數:100字左右;開頭已為你寫好.

　　參考詞匯:宣誓make an oath

　　Dear Tom,

　　Its great to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　Possible version:

　　Dear Tom,

　　Its great to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.

　　In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty/responsibility for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think its very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　假如你是李華,昨天學校為你們舉辦了18歲成人宣誓儀式.請根據下列要點給你在美國的筆友發一封電子郵件,描述宣誓儀式過程并簡述你的感受.

　　要點:1.宣誓儀式;2.感謝家長和老師的培養和教育;3.老師送賀卡;4.表演節目

　　注意:1.郵件必須包括以上要點,可適當發揮;2.詞數:100字左右;開頭已為你寫好.

　　參考詞匯:宣誓make an oath

　　Dear Tom,

　　Its great to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　Possible version:

　　Dear Tom,

　　Its great to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.

　　In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty/responsibility for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think its very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua