gre argument75提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：商業(yè)

　　gre argument75題目：

　　The following appeared in a newsletter about health.

　　The proportion of children in the United States who are overweight is greater now than ever before. Obesity rates among children have been increasing since the 1970s, and during that same time period, the proportion of children living in suburbs has increased. Whereas children in rural areas tend to have outdoor active chores and children in cities often walk to school or other places they need to go, children in suburbs are typically driven everywhere. Thus the increase in childhood obesity is probably due mainly to the suburbanization of America and the associated decrease in the opportunities children have for exercise.

　　提綱：

　　The author fails to establish a causal relationship between living in suburbs and obesity of children.

　　The author does not provide the obesity rates among children who live in suburbs, rural areas and cities, respectively.

　　No evidence is provided to show that children in suburbs have no sufficient opportunities for exercise.

　　The author unfairly assumes that the lack of exercise will necessarily lead to obesity.

　　注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：商業(yè)

　　gre argument75題目：

　　The following appeared in a newsletter about health.

　　The proportion of children in the United States who are overweight is greater now than ever before. Obesity rates among children have been increasing since the 1970s, and during that same time period, the proportion of children living in suburbs has increased. Whereas children in rural areas tend to have outdoor active chores and children in cities often walk to school or other places they need to go, children in suburbs are typically driven everywhere. Thus the increase in childhood obesity is probably due mainly to the suburbanization of America and the associated decrease in the opportunities children have for exercise.

　　提綱：

　　The author fails to establish a causal relationship between living in suburbs and obesity of children.

　　The author does not provide the obesity rates among children who live in suburbs, rural areas and cities, respectively.

　　No evidence is provided to show that children in suburbs have no sufficient opportunities for exercise.

　　The author unfairly assumes that the lack of exercise will necessarily lead to obesity.

　　注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強。