GRE寫作指導:孫遠作文筆記下載

　　第二天 6.19

　　一、寫作步驟：

　　1. skim the question and write the introduction

　　2. input the topic sentence. 找出問題所在，一個問題一句話

　　3. develop the body paragraphs one by one. 逐一展開問題段落，按重要性遞減的規律展開

　　4. conclusion

　　5. checking

　　二、開頭段的寫作：

　　找出原論證的結論或主張，指出原論證的論據和假設，指出原論證的邏輯錯誤。

　　忠實的保留原始信息。 用自己的詞保留原始信息。

　　In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims that..To support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence

　　that and that In addition , the arguer reasons that .. This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.

　　三、SURVEY 問題：

　　1. vague = misleading

　　2. question: what questions will ask in the survey?

　　Loaded questions 有誤導性的問題

　　3. Who

　　4. Average 平均數不適合于每個成員

　　5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation 混淆因果關系與相關性

　　Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.

　　6. When was the survey conducted?

　　7. Are respondents being forthright ?

　　Image men / essence men

　　閃光句型:

　　1. the arguer over simplifies the issue of

　　2. the arguer unfairly assumes that

　　3. the arguer fails take into account other factors that

　　4. the procedure of the survey might be problematic.

　　第二天 6.19

　　一、寫作步驟：

　　1. skim the question and write the introduction

　　2. input the topic sentence. 找出問題所在，一個問題一句話

　　3. develop the body paragraphs one by one. 逐一展開問題段落，按重要性遞減的規律展開

　　4. conclusion

　　5. checking

　　二、開頭段的寫作：

　　找出原論證的結論或主張，指出原論證的論據和假設，指出原論證的邏輯錯誤。

　　忠實的保留原始信息。 用自己的詞保留原始信息。

　　In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims that..To support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence

　　that and that In addition , the arguer reasons that .. This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.

　　三、SURVEY 問題：

　　1. vague = misleading

　　2. question: what questions will ask in the survey?

　　Loaded questions 有誤導性的問題

　　3. Who

　　4. Average 平均數不適合于每個成員

　　5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation 混淆因果關系與相關性

　　Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.

　　6. When was the survey conducted?

　　7. Are respondents being forthright ?

　　Image men / essence men

　　閃光句型:

　　1. the arguer over simplifies the issue of

　　2. the arguer unfairly assumes that

　　3. the arguer fails take into account other factors that

　　4. the procedure of the survey might be problematic.