GRE寫作提綱舉例指導（30）
30The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
30 盡管科技為生活帶來很多便利，但目的不僅僅是提高效率和有更多娛樂時間
1、承認科技發展帶來的便利和高效
telephone, Internet, improve th e efficiency in communication
automobile, train, plane fast transportation
household electronics microwave oven; electronic cooker; washing machine
2、科技發展提高效率的同時娛樂時間并沒有增加
be expected to have high er production; increased workload; employee complain
3、科技發展有許多目的，不僅限于提高效率和帶來娛樂時間
medical technology earlier detect of disease; the once fatal diseas e curable; reduce suffering for patiens; information technology facilitate global communication, info rmation sharing; civil engineering construction of building, bridge, road higher quality
30.技術進步和閑暇
一、技術應該帶來效率，但確實越來越忙，不過技術進步的 purpose is far more than leisure
二、技術應該帶來效率 It is true that technological advancement have made life faster and easier--that is, more efficient.
1.Watt使生產有效率，懷特兄弟使交通便利，貝爾使溝通效率，
2. ENIAC 使life style 改變，document 和calculate 更效率，Internet 通訊快捷MSN，使搜索信息效率google,yahoomore informed society can make quicker responses to ...
三、但確實越來越忙
1.Empirical evidence, Busy 這個詞很 popular
2.像instant foods, communication tool, faster transportation 都使生活更加繁忙
3.技術進步的 addition time 不是為了閑暇，而是為工作。
4.使競爭更加激烈，增加了工作時間，又不斷推動技術的進步，紅舞鞋
四、purpose遠大于帶來閑暇
1.醫學進步，計量經濟學，engineering 進步structural integrity
2.是為了有更好的生活，幫助弱勢群體
2.甚至，就僅僅人類的本性要去追求技術進步
30TThe primary goal of technologica l advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
技術進步的最主要的目標就是提高人們的效率，使得每個人都有更多的閑暇時間
① First of all, as we have witnessed, achievement in technology has immensely improved peoples efficiency, such as plane, assembly-line mass prod uction, robots. Computer, etc.
② The suggestion that technologys chief goal should be to facilitate leisure is simply wrongheaded. There are far more vital concerns that technology can and should address. 如：overcome treats, health, emotion
?、?最主要目標絕不是增加空閑時間。As a matter of fact, increasing efficiency is merely a byproduct of the advance of technology. Convenience long life/longevity
30The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
30 盡管科技為生活帶來很多便利，但目的不僅僅是提高效率和有更多娛樂時間
1、承認科技發展帶來的便利和高效
telephone, Internet, improve th e efficiency in communication
automobile, train, plane fast transportation
household electronics microwave oven; electronic cooker; washing machine
2、科技發展提高效率的同時娛樂時間并沒有增加
be expected to have high er production; increased workload; employee complain
3、科技發展有許多目的，不僅限于提高效率和帶來娛樂時間
medical technology earlier detect of disease; the once fatal diseas e curable; reduce suffering for patiens; information technology facilitate global communication, info rmation sharing; civil engineering construction of building, bridge, road higher quality
30.技術進步和閑暇
一、技術應該帶來效率，但確實越來越忙，不過技術進步的 purpose is far more than leisure
二、技術應該帶來效率 It is true that technological advancement have made life faster and easier--that is, more efficient.
1.Watt使生產有效率，懷特兄弟使交通便利，貝爾使溝通效率，
2. ENIAC 使life style 改變，document 和calculate 更效率，Internet 通訊快捷MSN，使搜索信息效率google,yahoomore informed society can make quicker responses to ...
三、但確實越來越忙
1.Empirical evidence, Busy 這個詞很 popular
2.像instant foods, communication tool, faster transportation 都使生活更加繁忙
3.技術進步的 addition time 不是為了閑暇，而是為工作。
4.使競爭更加激烈，增加了工作時間，又不斷推動技術的進步，紅舞鞋
四、purpose遠大于帶來閑暇
1.醫學進步，計量經濟學，engineering 進步structural integrity
2.是為了有更好的生活，幫助弱勢群體
2.甚至，就僅僅人類的本性要去追求技術進步
30TThe primary goal of technologica l advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
技術進步的最主要的目標就是提高人們的效率，使得每個人都有更多的閑暇時間
?、?First of all, as we have witnessed, achievement in technology has immensely improved peoples efficiency, such as plane, assembly-line mass prod uction, robots. Computer, etc.
?、?The suggestion that technologys chief goal should be to facilitate leisure is simply wrongheaded. There are far more vital concerns that technology can and should address. 如：overcome treats, health, emotion
?、?最主要目標絕不是增加空閑時間。As a matter of fact, increasing efficiency is merely a byproduct of the advance of technology. Convenience long life/longevity
