考研英語作文的范文名師批改（十二）
考研英語作文熱門話題范文：道德滑坡
①Looking at this thought-provoking picture symbolically depicted by the drawer, I do realize the urgency to improve the moral standards nowadays. ②A pregnant woman, an old man and his little granddaughter standson the crowded bus, looking at a young man who sits in the seat comfortably with a piece of black cloth covering his eyes, puzzled and indignant.①The temporary blind in the picture indicates a serious phenomenon in the modern society that some young people are suffering from moral decline. ②The reasons contributing to moral decline are worth pondering. ③First, respecting the old and caring the young is abandoned by some modern people, because they only care about their own benefits. ④Only if you could provide them with a great outcome,will they lend you a hand in exchange. ⑤In addition, the educational system is also to blame. ⑥It emphasizes more on high marks at the expense of having few time to teach traditional moral values in school which leads to peoples defect on this issue.①It is high time that we fostered our moral values. ②For one thing, schools and governments should play an active role in advocating moral values and traditional virtues to teach the young. ③For another, individuals should learn more about virtues and help people around with a warm heart. ④Only through our joint effort, could we recollect the virtues.
編輯點評
文章亮點：文章結構完整，每個段落的功能基本得以體現。文章錯誤：①語法錯誤：文章出現了一些語法錯誤，比如被動語態、名詞單復數形式等。②句法錯誤：有的句子表達不夠清楚。比如第一段第②句，第二段第⑤句。修改意見：文章整體結構不錯，但是要注意一些細節，避免不必要的錯誤。本文中，單復數一致問題較多，希望作者在完成習作時應多檢查，盡量減少此類錯誤。
考研英語作文熱門話題范文：道德滑坡
①Looking at this thought-provoking picture symbolically depicted by the drawer, I do realize the urgency to improve the moral standards nowadays. ②A pregnant woman, an old man and his little granddaughter standson the crowded bus, looking at a young man who sits in the seat comfortably with a piece of black cloth covering his eyes, puzzled and indignant.①The temporary blind in the picture indicates a serious phenomenon in the modern society that some young people are suffering from moral decline. ②The reasons contributing to moral decline are worth pondering. ③First, respecting the old and caring the young is abandoned by some modern people, because they only care about their own benefits. ④Only if you could provide them with a great outcome,will they lend you a hand in exchange. ⑤In addition, the educational system is also to blame. ⑥It emphasizes more on high marks at the expense of having few time to teach traditional moral values in school which leads to peoples defect on this issue.①It is high time that we fostered our moral values. ②For one thing, schools and governments should play an active role in advocating moral values and traditional virtues to teach the young. ③For another, individuals should learn more about virtues and help people around with a warm heart. ④Only through our joint effort, could we recollect the virtues.
編輯點評
文章亮點：文章結構完整，每個段落的功能基本得以體現。文章錯誤：①語法錯誤：文章出現了一些語法錯誤，比如被動語態、名詞單復數形式等。②句法錯誤：有的句子表達不夠清楚。比如第一段第②句，第二段第⑤句。修改意見：文章整體結構不錯，但是要注意一些細節，避免不必要的錯誤。本文中，單復數一致問題較多，希望作者在完成習作時應多檢查，盡量減少此類錯誤。
