2024屆高考英語一輪復習《全優課堂》寫作技能步步高寫作層級特訓：要訣4.2.滿分作文登場（新人教版含答案）
第三部分 要訣四
(2024福建)
請閱讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數為120左右的短文。
內容要求：
鑿壁偷光
1．描述畫面；
2．概述其含義；
3．談談個人感想。
注意：
1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．可適當發揮，使文章內容充實、行文連貫；
3．文中不能出現考生的具體信息。
參考詞匯：鑿，鉆：bore
In the picture，____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
考場作文
In the picture, we can see a boy in rags.He was ①seating at a table with a pile of books on it.(1)He was reading a book attentively with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall.
②As is known to us that this is a story from an ancient Chinese idiom.So poor was the boy that he couldn't afford even a candle.Therefore, in order to read at night, he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house.What we can learn from the story is that we should do what we can ③acquire knowledge when faced with difficult situations.(2)When we try to improve ourselves by learning, we can make good preparations for the future.
1．錯誤聚焦：
(1)①seat作動詞時是及物動詞，故應將①改為______或__________。
(2)②As處于形式主語的位置，故應將As改為_______。
(3) do what sb.can to do為固定句型，故應在acquire前加上______________。
【答案】(1)seated/sitting (2)It (3)to
2．高分靚句：
(1)用強調句型對畫線(1)中的with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall進行強調：_______________________________________
(2)將畫線(2)改為Only when引導的倒裝句：______________________________________
【答案】
(1)It was with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall that he was reading a book attentively.
(2)Only when we try to improve ourselves by learning, can we make good preparations for the future.
參考范文
In_the_picture,_we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor, couldn't afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.
Of course, things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.
(2024山東威海一中高三二模)
下圖是學校英語網站的新增部分欄目，網站負責人Mr.Black就此向同學們征詢意見。假如你是李華，請你根據以下提示用英語給Mr.Black寫一封E-mail。
E-mail主要內容包括：
1．最喜歡的欄目及理由；
2．對欄目設置的意見或建議。
注意：
①詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
②可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
③參考詞匯：欄目：column
Dear Mr.Black，
How are you doing?
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear_Mr.Black,_
How are you doing?
I'm glad that there will be some new columns in our English website.Of the four columns, I have higher expectation to Today's World.As you know, today's world is a changing one.We'll become outdated if we turn a deaf ear to it.From the new column Today's World not only can we learn what's going on around the world, but also it can enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.
As to suggestions, I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website.Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well, but short of learning chances after class.I do hope our website can do something about it.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
第三部分 要訣四
(2024福建)
請閱讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數為120左右的短文。
內容要求：
鑿壁偷光
1．描述畫面；
2．概述其含義；
3．談談個人感想。
注意：
1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．可適當發揮，使文章內容充實、行文連貫；
3．文中不能出現考生的具體信息。
參考詞匯：鑿，鉆：bore
In the picture，____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
考場作文
In the picture, we can see a boy in rags.He was ①seating at a table with a pile of books on it.(1)He was reading a book attentively with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall.
②As is known to us that this is a story from an ancient Chinese idiom.So poor was the boy that he couldn't afford even a candle.Therefore, in order to read at night, he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house.What we can learn from the story is that we should do what we can ③acquire knowledge when faced with difficult situations.(2)When we try to improve ourselves by learning, we can make good preparations for the future.
1．錯誤聚焦：
(1)①seat作動詞時是及物動詞，故應將①改為______或__________。
(2)②As處于形式主語的位置，故應將As改為_______。
(3) do what sb.can to do為固定句型，故應在acquire前加上______________。
【答案】(1)seated/sitting (2)It (3)to
2．高分靚句：
(1)用強調句型對畫線(1)中的with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall進行強調：_______________________________________
(2)將畫線(2)改為Only when引導的倒裝句：______________________________________
【答案】
(1)It was with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall that he was reading a book attentively.
(2)Only when we try to improve ourselves by learning, can we make good preparations for the future.
參考范文
In_the_picture,_we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor, couldn't afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.
Of course, things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.
(2024山東威海一中高三二模)
下圖是學校英語網站的新增部分欄目，網站負責人Mr.Black就此向同學們征詢意見。假如你是李華，請你根據以下提示用英語給Mr.Black寫一封E-mail。
E-mail主要內容包括：
1．最喜歡的欄目及理由；
2．對欄目設置的意見或建議。
注意：
①詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
②可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
③參考詞匯：欄目：column
Dear Mr.Black，
How are you doing?
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear_Mr.Black,_
How are you doing?
I'm glad that there will be some new columns in our English website.Of the four columns, I have higher expectation to Today's World.As you know, today's world is a changing one.We'll become outdated if we turn a deaf ear to it.From the new column Today's World not only can we learn what's going on around the world, but also it can enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.
As to suggestions, I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website.Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well, but short of learning chances after class.I do hope our website can do something about it.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
