2024屆高考英語一輪復習寫作增分技巧講解課件：3 教你如何擴展句子
寫作進階提升之三 ——怎樣擴展句子
寫作進階提升 簡單句的5個基本句型 5 主語+系動詞+表語
S+Link.V+P
1. 主語+謂語
S +V.
2. 主語+謂語+賓語
S+Vt+O 3.主語+謂語+間賓+直賓
(S+Vt+Oi+Od)
4.主語+謂語+賓語+賓補
(S+Vt+O+O.C) Mary was a girl.
She smiled. Tom liked her. He gave her a picture. She put the picture
on the wall.
1. Mary was a (n) _________
girl.（形容詞）
2. She smiled _______
. (副詞）
3. Tom liked her _______
. （ 副詞）
4. He gave her a picture _______________
______
（定語從句）
5. She put the picture on the wall _______
_____________________
（狀語從句）
beautiful
happily
secretly
that he had drawn
for her .
so that
she could see it conveniently . 方法一
添加修飾成分：形容詞、副詞、不定式 短語、分詞短語、介詞短語、定語從句、狀語從 句等。
Mary was a beautiful and ①
girl .
Tom and ②
liked her very much.
They soon became good friends. On Mary’s birthday, Tom gave her a picture and
③
She smiled happily ,
④
them and put the picture on
the wall.
clever
Jack
a bunch of roses.
accepted 方法二
添加并列成分：
Jack was rich. He had his own company.
He
made
a
fortune.
He bought
Mary
a diamond ring. Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him .
During
the same night ,Tom couldn’t get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.
方法三
構成并列句：用并列連詞
and, so, but,
while, for（因為）等。
Jack was rich, ①
he had his own company
②
made a fortune, ③
he bought Mary
a diamond ring, ④
neither Jack nor Tom knew
what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s
birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary
to marry him ⑤
Tom couldn’t get to sleep until
he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his
memory.
for and so
but while After her birthday party, Mary couldn’t help looking at the picture now and then
because
in her eyes looking at herself in the picture
was like looking at a superstar on the screen. To see is to believe. The picture proved
that
Tom had a talent for painting and
her
choosing him as her boy friend
was a wise decision. 方法四
使用V-ing短語、不定式短語或名詞性從句等做主語、賓語或表語等。
that
___ ______________________
______ _______________________
Summary 擴展句子的方法 方法一：添加修飾成分 方法二：添加并列成分 方法三：構成并列句 方法四：使用V-ing短語、不定
式短語或名詞性從句
作主語、賓語或表語等 It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
Step 1. Finish reading the following paragraph
in one minute to get the main idea.
It was obvious ①
Jack was unhappy.
②
made him angry was ③
the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. ④
he told Mary that not only he was more handsome ⑤
Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly ⑥
firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact ⑦
liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. ⑧
，we remain good friends as before. ”
that What that When than but that However Step 2. Fill in the missing words according to
the context.
Step 3. Read aloud the following paragraph ,
ready to repeat it.
It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
It was obvious that ___________. What _____ was that the diamond ring _______________ was refused by her.
When he told Mary
that not only
___________ than Tom，_______ he had a car, a
flat ______. Mary said ______ but _______, “You
should know the fact that liking you does not mean
_________. To have money is not ___________.
However, we remain good friends as before..”
Repeat Who will win the game? Step 4
Homework:
Do exercises 1 and 2 in
your paper.
寫作進階提升之三 ——怎樣擴展句子
寫作進階提升 簡單句的5個基本句型 5 主語+系動詞+表語
S+Link.V+P
1. 主語+謂語
S +V.
2. 主語+謂語+賓語
S+Vt+O 3.主語+謂語+間賓+直賓
(S+Vt+Oi+Od)
4.主語+謂語+賓語+賓補
(S+Vt+O+O.C) Mary was a girl.
She smiled. Tom liked her. He gave her a picture. She put the picture
on the wall.
1. Mary was a (n) _________
girl.（形容詞）
2. She smiled _______
. (副詞）
3. Tom liked her _______
. （ 副詞）
4. He gave her a picture _______________
______
（定語從句）
5. She put the picture on the wall _______
_____________________
（狀語從句）
beautiful
happily
secretly
that he had drawn
for her .
so that
she could see it conveniently . 方法一
添加修飾成分：形容詞、副詞、不定式 短語、分詞短語、介詞短語、定語從句、狀語從 句等。
Mary was a beautiful and ①
girl .
Tom and ②
liked her very much.
They soon became good friends. On Mary’s birthday, Tom gave her a picture and
③
She smiled happily ,
④
them and put the picture on
the wall.
clever
Jack
a bunch of roses.
accepted 方法二
添加并列成分：
Jack was rich. He had his own company.
He
made
a
fortune.
He bought
Mary
a diamond ring. Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him .
During
the same night ,Tom couldn’t get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.
方法三
構成并列句：用并列連詞
and, so, but,
while, for（因為）等。
Jack was rich, ①
he had his own company
②
made a fortune, ③
he bought Mary
a diamond ring, ④
neither Jack nor Tom knew
what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s
birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary
to marry him ⑤
Tom couldn’t get to sleep until
he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his
memory.
for and so
but while After her birthday party, Mary couldn’t help looking at the picture now and then
because
in her eyes looking at herself in the picture
was like looking at a superstar on the screen. To see is to believe. The picture proved
that
Tom had a talent for painting and
her
choosing him as her boy friend
was a wise decision. 方法四
使用V-ing短語、不定式短語或名詞性從句等做主語、賓語或表語等。
that
___ ______________________
______ _______________________
Summary 擴展句子的方法 方法一：添加修飾成分 方法二：添加并列成分 方法三：構成并列句 方法四：使用V-ing短語、不定
式短語或名詞性從句
作主語、賓語或表語等 It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
Step 1. Finish reading the following paragraph
in one minute to get the main idea.
It was obvious ①
Jack was unhappy.
②
made him angry was ③
the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. ④
he told Mary that not only he was more handsome ⑤
Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly ⑥
firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact ⑦
liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. ⑧
，we remain good friends as before. ”
that What that When than but that However Step 2. Fill in the missing words according to
the context.
Step 3. Read aloud the following paragraph ,
ready to repeat it.
It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
It was obvious that ___________. What _____ was that the diamond ring _______________ was refused by her.
When he told Mary
that not only
___________ than Tom，_______ he had a car, a
flat ______. Mary said ______ but _______, “You
should know the fact that liking you does not mean
_________. To have money is not ___________.
However, we remain good friends as before..”
Repeat Who will win the game? Step 4
Homework:
Do exercises 1 and 2 in
your paper.
