2024年高考英語高效書面表達(dá)專題卷：20（含解析）

　　1．

　　假如你叫Li Hai，是一名國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生。你最近對200名同學(xué)(男女各半)的擇業(yè)理想做了一次調(diào)查，現(xiàn)將調(diào)查結(jié)果(如下圖所示)用英語向校長Mr．Green寫一篇報(bào)告。

　　注意：(1)報(bào)告應(yīng)包括圖表所示全部內(nèi)容。

　　(2)詞數(shù)100左右。

　　2．書面表達(dá)（15分）

　　假設(shè)你是李明，請你的美國朋友Mike到溫州和你共度中秋節(jié)。簡短介紹你和他共度中秋節(jié)的安排并談?wù)勀銓Υ藗鹘y(tǒng)節(jié)日的看法。字?jǐn)?shù): 80—100。要點(diǎn)如下:

　　1. 上午, 參觀五馬街。街上將裝點(diǎn)著花，燈籠（lantern）等。

　　2. 下午參加聚會(huì)。人們聚集賞詩。

　　3. 接著，與家人吃飯，此乃自古以來的傳統(tǒng)。

　　4. 晚上，吃月餅， 賞月，緬懷祖先，向往未來。

　　Dear Mike,

　　How time flies. It has been nearly half a year since I spent Thanksgiving day with you in US . I miss you so. Chinese traditional festival, the mid-autumn festival, which takes place on the 15th of the 8th lunar month, is drawing near. So , why not fly to Wenzhou to enjoy a totally different Thanksgiving in Chinese style?

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Come and join me!

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　3．你校正在開展創(chuàng)建和諧校園系列活動(dòng)，其中包括“做文明學(xué)生，創(chuàng)和諧校園”英語演講比賽，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，參加該活動(dòng)。

　　1．文明行為使校園和諧，也是學(xué)生高素質(zhì)的體現(xiàn)。

　　2．文明行為：講禮貌，有愛心；維護(hù)校園環(huán)境，愛護(hù)一草一木；勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)；……

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)左右；

　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭語與結(jié)尾語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　參考詞匯：文明行為civilized behaviour；和諧harmony

　　Good afternoon，teachers and students._________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　_______

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　That’s all.Thank you!

　　4．請根據(jù)以下表格所提供的內(nèi)容, 寫一篇短文。

　　時(shí) 間 2024年5月27日

　　地 點(diǎn) 市區(qū)一十字路口紅綠燈處

　　經(jīng) 過 一名中年婦女騎車帶著女兒闖了紅燈, 并辱罵交警。半小時(shí)后, 女兒返回, 遞上一封道歉信

　　你的看法 ……

　　應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:

　　1. 簡述此事;

　　2. 就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶?至少兩點(diǎn))。

　　注意:

　　1. 對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述, 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯。

　　2. 詞數(shù)150個(gè)左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)個(gè)人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。

　　A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2024. _______________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　5．你是高二（1）班的李華。最近你校舉行了一次英語讀書演講比賽。請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，以“What Can Reading Bring Us?”為題寫一篇英文演講稿，呼吁大家多讀書、讀好書。

　　注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)120單詞左右；

　　2. 可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫。

　　1．Dear Mr. Green,

　　I have recently made a survey among 200 boys and girls about their future jobs.

　　What boys like to do most is to become scientists and their second choice is to become businessmen. While the largest group of girls would like to be teachers. Only a few boys want to do this job. It is interesting that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyer, more boys expect to have this job. However, there are still some students who are not clear about their future.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hai

　　【解析】

　　2．Dear Mike,

　　How time flies. It has been nearly half a year since I spent Thanksgiving day with you in US. I miss you so. Chinese traditional festival, the mid-autumn festival, which takes place on the 15th of the 8th lunar month, is drawing near. So , why not fly to Wenzhou to enjoy a totally different Thanksgiving in Chinese style?

　　Early on that morning, we can visit Wuma Street, which will be decorated with followers, lanterns and flags and full of festival atmosphere. In the afternoon, we may try joining in a get-together , where people gather to appreciate a lot of Chinese ancient poems. Then we can have a feast with my family members which has been a traditional event since ancient times. Late in the evening, we may enjoy mooncakes and admire the moon hanging high up in the sky to honour our ancestors and look forward to a year of harvest. The sweetness of mooncakes, the clear bright moon and the laughter of family members and close friends make a peaceful and romantic Chinese experience.

　　Come and join me!

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　【解析】

　　3．見解析

　　【解析】參考范文

　　Good afternoon，teachers and students.I feel honored to make a speech here.The title is “Be a Civilized Student，Construct a Harmonious School”．

　　As everybody knows，civilized behaviour is of great importance for a student.It not only shows our good quality but also makes ourselves enjoy the harmony of school life，in which we can gain a better result of study.

　　How can we develop civilized behaviour？The first important thing we should do is to be a student who is with good manners and a student who is always ready to help people in need.Besides，we should keep the school environment clean.Never destroy the plants in our school，such as flowers，trees and grass.Most importantly，we should remember working hard and obeying the school rules make up the most necessary civilized behaviour as a student.

　　That’s all.Thank you!

　　4．見解析

　　【解析】參考范文：

　　A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2024. Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.

　　People with bad manners can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.

　　Luckily, we are also surrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.

　　5．

　　What Can A Good Book Bring Us

　　As we all know, there are plenty of famous sayings about good books and reading. such as?“Reading a good book is like talking with a great many wise and noble people in the past”, “Books are the stepping stones to human progress.” From these famous sayings we can?draw a safe conclusion that a good book can bring us not only wisdom of the wise people in history, but also the progress and development of both ourselves and we?human beings.

　　In order to benefit from reading good books, we should first learn to tell good books from bad ones. In most people’s opinion, books that may have bad influence over our healthy growth and development, or books that may mislead us are all bad books. We should of course avoid reading such books. On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books. While?reading good books, we can get not only the pleasure of reading and rich knowledge, we can also broaden our horizons and enrich our spiritual world. On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books.

　　“Reading makes a full man,” Francis Bacon once said in his famous essay.Therefore, if you intend to become a full man, friends, let’s try hand in hand to read good books together.

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些高級(jí)短語draw a conclusion 得出結(jié)論；benefit from從。。受益；avoid doing sth 避免做某事； On the contrary相反；At the same time,同時(shí)；be of great help 有所幫助；Reading a good book is like talking with a great many wise and noble people in the past這個(gè)句子中動(dòng)名詞做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用作第三人稱單數(shù)；On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books.這個(gè)句子involed 分詞做后置定語修飾those books,that引導(dǎo)books的定語從句。On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books.這個(gè)句子中what引導(dǎo)主語從句；

　　考點(diǎn)：作文

　　1．

　　假如你叫Li Hai，是一名國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生。你最近對200名同學(xué)(男女各半)的擇業(yè)理想做了一次調(diào)查，現(xiàn)將調(diào)查結(jié)果(如下圖所示)用英語向校長Mr．Green寫一篇報(bào)告。

　　注意：(1)報(bào)告應(yīng)包括圖表所示全部內(nèi)容。

　　(2)詞數(shù)100左右。

　　2．書面表達(dá)（15分）

　　假設(shè)你是李明，請你的美國朋友Mike到溫州和你共度中秋節(jié)。簡短介紹你和他共度中秋節(jié)的安排并談?wù)勀銓Υ藗鹘y(tǒng)節(jié)日的看法。字?jǐn)?shù): 80—100。要點(diǎn)如下:

　　1. 上午, 參觀五馬街。街上將裝點(diǎn)著花，燈籠（lantern）等。

　　2. 下午參加聚會(huì)。人們聚集賞詩。

　　3. 接著，與家人吃飯，此乃自古以來的傳統(tǒng)。

　　4. 晚上，吃月餅， 賞月，緬懷祖先，向往未來。

　　Dear Mike,

　　How time flies. It has been nearly half a year since I spent Thanksgiving day with you in US . I miss you so. Chinese traditional festival, the mid-autumn festival, which takes place on the 15th of the 8th lunar month, is drawing near. So , why not fly to Wenzhou to enjoy a totally different Thanksgiving in Chinese style?

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Come and join me!

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　3．你校正在開展創(chuàng)建和諧校園系列活動(dòng)，其中包括“做文明學(xué)生，創(chuàng)和諧校園”英語演講比賽，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，參加該活動(dòng)。

　　1．文明行為使校園和諧，也是學(xué)生高素質(zhì)的體現(xiàn)。

　　2．文明行為：講禮貌，有愛心；維護(hù)校園環(huán)境，愛護(hù)一草一木；勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)；……

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)左右；

　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭語與結(jié)尾語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　參考詞匯：文明行為civilized behaviour；和諧harmony

　　Good afternoon，teachers and students._________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　_______

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　That’s all.Thank you!

　　4．請根據(jù)以下表格所提供的內(nèi)容, 寫一篇短文。

　　時(shí) 間 2024年5月27日

　　地 點(diǎn) 市區(qū)一十字路口紅綠燈處

　　經(jīng) 過 一名中年婦女騎車帶著女兒闖了紅燈, 并辱罵交警。半小時(shí)后, 女兒返回, 遞上一封道歉信

　　你的看法 ……

　　應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:

　　1. 簡述此事;

　　2. 就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶?至少兩點(diǎn))。

　　注意:

　　1. 對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述, 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯。

　　2. 詞數(shù)150個(gè)左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)個(gè)人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。

　　A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2024. _______________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　5．你是高二（1）班的李華。最近你校舉行了一次英語讀書演講比賽。請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，以“What Can Reading Bring Us?”為題寫一篇英文演講稿，呼吁大家多讀書、讀好書。

　　注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)120單詞左右；

　　2. 可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，以使行文連貫。

　　1．Dear Mr. Green,

　　I have recently made a survey among 200 boys and girls about their future jobs.

　　What boys like to do most is to become scientists and their second choice is to become businessmen. While the largest group of girls would like to be teachers. Only a few boys want to do this job. It is interesting that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyer, more boys expect to have this job. However, there are still some students who are not clear about their future.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hai

　　【解析】

　　2．Dear Mike,

　　How time flies. It has been nearly half a year since I spent Thanksgiving day with you in US. I miss you so. Chinese traditional festival, the mid-autumn festival, which takes place on the 15th of the 8th lunar month, is drawing near. So , why not fly to Wenzhou to enjoy a totally different Thanksgiving in Chinese style?

　　Early on that morning, we can visit Wuma Street, which will be decorated with followers, lanterns and flags and full of festival atmosphere. In the afternoon, we may try joining in a get-together , where people gather to appreciate a lot of Chinese ancient poems. Then we can have a feast with my family members which has been a traditional event since ancient times. Late in the evening, we may enjoy mooncakes and admire the moon hanging high up in the sky to honour our ancestors and look forward to a year of harvest. The sweetness of mooncakes, the clear bright moon and the laughter of family members and close friends make a peaceful and romantic Chinese experience.

　　Come and join me!

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　【解析】

　　3．見解析

　　【解析】參考范文

　　Good afternoon，teachers and students.I feel honored to make a speech here.The title is “Be a Civilized Student，Construct a Harmonious School”．

　　As everybody knows，civilized behaviour is of great importance for a student.It not only shows our good quality but also makes ourselves enjoy the harmony of school life，in which we can gain a better result of study.

　　How can we develop civilized behaviour？The first important thing we should do is to be a student who is with good manners and a student who is always ready to help people in need.Besides，we should keep the school environment clean.Never destroy the plants in our school，such as flowers，trees and grass.Most importantly，we should remember working hard and obeying the school rules make up the most necessary civilized behaviour as a student.

　　That’s all.Thank you!

　　4．見解析

　　【解析】參考范文：

　　A middle-aged woman ran the red light while riding her bicycle with her teenage daughter seated at the back on May 27, 2024. Stopped and fined by the policeman on duty, she was so angry that she abused the policeman. However, half an hour later, the daughter came back to the policeman, handing him a letter to apologize for her mother’s behavior.

　　People with bad manners can often be seen in our daily life, like the mother mentioned above. They have fallen into the habit of blaming others even when they themselves have behaved badly. They are self-centered, and don’t feel ashamed of what they have done. It is difficult for them to make a change unless they are educated properly.

　　Luckily, we are also surrounded by many virtuous people. When they have made a mistake carelessly or hurt others unintentionally, they feel guilty and will apologize for their behavior, like the daughter. How I hope all of us are kind, polite and helpful to each other so that we can enjoy a better life.

　　5．

　　What Can A Good Book Bring Us

　　As we all know, there are plenty of famous sayings about good books and reading. such as?“Reading a good book is like talking with a great many wise and noble people in the past”, “Books are the stepping stones to human progress.” From these famous sayings we can?draw a safe conclusion that a good book can bring us not only wisdom of the wise people in history, but also the progress and development of both ourselves and we?human beings.

　　In order to benefit from reading good books, we should first learn to tell good books from bad ones. In most people’s opinion, books that may have bad influence over our healthy growth and development, or books that may mislead us are all bad books. We should of course avoid reading such books. On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books. While?reading good books, we can get not only the pleasure of reading and rich knowledge, we can also broaden our horizons and enrich our spiritual world. On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books.

　　“Reading makes a full man,” Francis Bacon once said in his famous essay.Therefore, if you intend to become a full man, friends, let’s try hand in hand to read good books together.

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些高級(jí)短語draw a conclusion 得出結(jié)論；benefit from從。。受益；avoid doing sth 避免做某事； On the contrary相反；At the same time,同時(shí)；be of great help 有所幫助；Reading a good book is like talking with a great many wise and noble people in the past這個(gè)句子中動(dòng)名詞做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用作第三人稱單數(shù)；On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books.這個(gè)句子involed 分詞做后置定語修飾those books,that引導(dǎo)books的定語從句。On the contrary, those books involved in practical skills and technologies, good advice on our study, work and life, and books that are considered to be “Masterpieces of world literature” and so on are good books.這個(gè)句子中what引導(dǎo)主語從句；

　　考點(diǎn)：作文