高中英語語法-范文講評：旅行

　　范文講評：旅行

　　　　「要求」

　　　　暑假就要到了，許多同學都會選擇旅游作為度假的一種方式。的確，旅游對一個人的身心健康頗有好處。那么就請你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇旅游的文章。

　　　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a persons perspective.

　　　　Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.

　　　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.

　　　　「范文」

　　　　Travel

　　　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a persons perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures，meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much，you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences，but also be aware of the vastness of nature.

　　　　Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience，which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later，you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences，thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.

　　　　The fields his study，nature was his book.

　　　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive，but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle，which，although slow，can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.

　　　　「評語」

　　　　本文首先陳述了旅游能夠開闊人們眼界的原因，接著指出為什么旅游能夠消除煩悶、抑郁的心情，最后說明進行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的優缺點。本篇各段解釋言簡意明，主題突出。come into contact with，enrich you knowledge and experiences，be aware of the vastness of nature，disperse your boredom，broaden your mind等詞語的恰當搭配，生動而準確地表現出了旅游的益處。

　　范文講評：旅行

　　　　「要求」

　　　　暑假就要到了，許多同學都會選擇旅游作為度假的一種方式。的確，旅游對一個人的身心健康頗有好處。那么就請你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇旅游的文章。

　　　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a persons perspective.

　　　　Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.

　　　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.

　　　　「范文」

　　　　Travel

　　　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a persons perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures，meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much，you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences，but also be aware of the vastness of nature.

　　　　Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience，which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later，you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences，thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.

　　　　The fields his study，nature was his book.

　　　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive，but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle，which，although slow，can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.

　　　　「評語」

　　　　本文首先陳述了旅游能夠開闊人們眼界的原因，接著指出為什么旅游能夠消除煩悶、抑郁的心情，最后說明進行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的優缺點。本篇各段解釋言簡意明，主題突出。come into contact with，enrich you knowledge and experiences，be aware of the vastness of nature，disperse your boredom，broaden your mind等詞語的恰當搭配，生動而準確地表現出了旅游的益處。