新版GRE寫作新題庫：Argument40
編輯點評： GRE寫作需要大家積累一定的寫作素材、鍛煉自己的邏輯思維、多多積累一些有用的句子和詞匯，有了這些基礎以后，就需要大家根據(jù)真題來進行練習寫作了。
Milk and dairy products are rich in vitamin D and calcium substances essential for building and maintaining bones. Many people therefore say that a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis, a disease that is linked to both environmental and genetic factors and that causes the bones to weaken significantly with age. But a long-term study of a large number of people found that those who consistently consumed dairy products throughout the years of the study have a higher rate of bone fractures than any other participants in the study. Since bone fractures are symptomatic of osteoporosis, this study result shows that a diet rich in dairy products may actually increase, rather than decrease, the risk of osteoporosis.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
牛奶和奶制品富含維生素D和鈣，這是骨骼生長和維持所必須的物質。因此很多人相信多吃奶制品的飲食可以幫助預防骨質疏松癥，這是一種骨骼隨年齡而顯著弱化而且與環(huán)境和基因因素相關聯(lián)的疾病。但是一項對大量人群的長期研究發(fā)現(xiàn)那些在研究期間經(jīng)常食用奶制品的人骨折發(fā)病率比其他參加研究的人要高。由于骨折是骨質疏松癥的癥狀之一，這一研究結果表明富含奶制品的飲食實際上會增加而不是減少患骨質疏松癥的危險
寫一篇回應，討論還需要何種具體的證據(jù)才能更好的評估上面的論證，并解釋這個證據(jù)是如何強化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
此上就是為大家提供的新版GRE寫作新題庫Argument部分的內(nèi)容，希望大家能夠在練習中提高自己的寫作水平。
編輯點評： GRE寫作需要大家積累一定的寫作素材、鍛煉自己的邏輯思維、多多積累一些有用的句子和詞匯，有了這些基礎以后，就需要大家根據(jù)真題來進行練習寫作了。
Milk and dairy products are rich in vitamin D and calcium substances essential for building and maintaining bones. Many people therefore say that a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis, a disease that is linked to both environmental and genetic factors and that causes the bones to weaken significantly with age. But a long-term study of a large number of people found that those who consistently consumed dairy products throughout the years of the study have a higher rate of bone fractures than any other participants in the study. Since bone fractures are symptomatic of osteoporosis, this study result shows that a diet rich in dairy products may actually increase, rather than decrease, the risk of osteoporosis.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
牛奶和奶制品富含維生素D和鈣，這是骨骼生長和維持所必須的物質。因此很多人相信多吃奶制品的飲食可以幫助預防骨質疏松癥，這是一種骨骼隨年齡而顯著弱化而且與環(huán)境和基因因素相關聯(lián)的疾病。但是一項對大量人群的長期研究發(fā)現(xiàn)那些在研究期間經(jīng)常食用奶制品的人骨折發(fā)病率比其他參加研究的人要高。由于骨折是骨質疏松癥的癥狀之一，這一研究結果表明富含奶制品的飲食實際上會增加而不是減少患骨質疏松癥的危險
寫一篇回應，討論還需要何種具體的證據(jù)才能更好的評估上面的論證，并解釋這個證據(jù)是如何強化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
此上就是為大家提供的新版GRE寫作新題庫Argument部分的內(nèi)容，希望大家能夠在練習中提高自己的寫作水平。
